This is the first WN I’ve read on this app and I’ve read around 50 other WN’s inbetween this WN and the review (I used other sites to read WN’s until I actually made an account), so my memory might be a bit hazy in terms of story development and world background. Writing Quality: 3.7/5 If I was the author I’d use a broader range of vocabulary, be more descriptive (quantity), and just have a detailed description (quality) if things like the surroundings, fights, etc. Writing Stability: 5/5 Not much to say here, 7-8 chapters a week consistently which is very good imo. Story Development: 3.2/5 Some plot holes here and there but nothing too major to the point where it’s detrimental to the story. It’s still too early to comment on this since this WN feels like it’ll easily be over 1000 chapters. I just hope the pace doesnt skyrocket out of nowhere and just becomes like your average cultivation novel right before the typical “holy continent” arc. Character Design: 3.5/5 It’s an odd mix of some characters are bland, some have an alright design, and some feel like actual humans. The MC has some dumb things about his personality like being overly paranoid of the system and his sponser. This category was originally going to be a 2.5/5, but after reading the recent chapters it looks like the huge main female cast might finally be getting some character development, so I decided to bump it to a 3.5/5. World Background: 3/5 From what I’ve read so far this has the potential to be a 5/5 if the author plans ahead carefully and doesn’t rush the rest of the story. In general, we haven’t been told that much about the world and beyond it, but it’s clear that the author has plans to talk about everything more in depth later on in the story. This is my completely objective review so even though i gave it an overall rating of 3.6/5 that doesn’t mean that it wasn’t entertaining or that i didn’t enjoy it. When VC reaches the 550 chapter mark I’ll update this review and make it way more detailed and in-depth, but until then the review stays as is. I hope everyone that reads this has a good day, cya💯
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LIKEYou’re comparing real life with a fictional story that the author has complete control of. On one hand paranoia is an actual problem people in real life suffer with, and on the other hand the auther made an obvious choice to make their character like that.
And any story, fiction or not - at least for me - is supposed to have realistic characters. I would not want to read about characters with impossible/unjustifiable traits no matter how grand the story. In this case, being overly paranoid is a possible real life trait that can be added to his character. If you think it is dumb, so be it. There is nothing wrong with comparing real life people to characters in a story. These characters are living out THEIR real life. They have thoughts, they have feelings, they can feel pain, etc. And they should be able to act like it. It is hard to immerse my mind into a world without that element. Therefore, I do not think paranoia is a dumb trait, or dumb in general. And I believe it is justified for his character. I like to think of stories as individuals living out their life rather than a puppet master pulling strings. It’s more fun that way.