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Singularity21

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The singularity born from the collision of storms

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  • Singularity21
    Singularity2113d
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    I can’t. I tried but the mc is an idiot. He fails to use his gift and asks permission for this and that. Thought he was supposed to be a king. It feels like a great gift was wasted on irredeemable trash taht a hi old just die. I feel like Licia has more personality than him. And while I’m at it let me add that his name if stupid too. Doesn’t have mc vibe. I ve seen extra’s with better names.

    Ch 12 The King Shall Give To The People, The People Shall Give To The King
    Gacha Kingdom Building
    Fantasy · uwuzer
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211mth
    Replied to light_the_fox

    True. Atleast Camilla’s situation could understood since it was her stepmom trying to protect her son or whatever. But this is just ridiculous.

    But after only a moment of hesitation, she didn't hide anything and said: "I just realized that the Lionheart Family has never intended to let a woman take the helm, no matter how outstanding they are. If I obediently married as a political chip, I would still have some value. But I refused. And some of the elders in my family felt that I had no value if I didn't choose to marry, even seen as a threat, so they made their move. And my brothers are interested in stealing the 'hero fate'... Overall, there are many who don't want me to leave the ruins alive."
    Catastrophe Card King
    Games · Blindness
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity212mth
    Commented

    The amount of grammar mistakes. 🤦🏻‍♂️, pls get an editing software ( there’s a lot of free ones) . It really throws me off trying to understand what’s intended from what’s written.

    Ch 1 End Of My Horror
    Master Of Horrors
    Fantasy · Ordki_Hozei
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity213mth
    Posted

    The premise is good and I he system seems decent too but the speed of plot advancement and the irrelevance of cultivation throws you off. There’s no political intrigue. It’s more of a action cultivation novel where the mc is an emperor. The worst is the inconsistency in translation, which ranges from names of the empires, cultivation levels, characters and more. Even the mc’s name has a George in it at one point for some reason. In conclusion, even if the plot is decent with potential, the translation leaves it abysmal to read.

    Invincible Divine Destiny Selection System
    Eastern · Dancing Silly Cat
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity213mth
    Commented

    @author This book is so good. But there’s a lot of grammatical errors. It could be solved if you had grammarly or an editor, and would improve the quality of the writing drastically.

    Ch 289 Chapter 123 Good Body Shape
    Catastrophe Card King
    Games · Blindness
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity217mth
    Commented

    Which country is this black palace from ?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: High-Efficiency Healing Liquid (Seeking Recommendations and Reviews)
    Serial Player
    Horror · Riding Waves To Find The Boat
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity2111mth
    Commented

    I don’t mean the sound rude but I really like the story and think you’re doing an excellent job with the plot so far so I hope you take my advice. Find an editor or something like Grammarly Pro. There’s spelling errors and repeated and rephrased sentences that reduce the overall quality of the work and the story content conveyed. It is my belief that It would increase the quality of your writing if you can address these things.

    Ch 70 Situation out of Hand? (1)
    Rebirth of the Ruined Noble
    Fantasy · Emberlight
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Commented

    The Illuminati would’ve hit better. I’m not loving illuminatos

    Ch 239 Lady Fate
    The Deceitful One
    Fantasy · PandaDumpling
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to lierra_0522

    It’s more likely to be plot armor. The fool path’s authority has fate and spirit related stuff so it’s probably influencing lumian. And he probably needs it since he’s in the crosshairs of an outer god.

    Ch 50 Observation
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to AMIR_REZA_KAZEMI

    I think that’s more for ritual than acting. Klein didn’t have to do ritual for ancient scholar potion but still had to act to digest didnt he ?

    Ch 37 "Dangerous Forest"
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Pandoraisme

    I don’t it’s the beyonder part alone. Ut might have to do with the fool’s symbol protecting him too. Aurore is a sequence 7 and yet, she doesn’t remember so I’m inclined to think it’s Klein’s influence along with being beyonder that let him remember this time. It might also be why Fors can’t interfere, she might become part of the loop is she invokved herself directly.

    Ch 32 Anomaly
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to God_hole

    True. It’s seems unlikely he ll become a red priest, considering the ritual requirements of the path. Just to become a sequence 4, he has to raise around 30 trustworthy subordinates. With Klein asleep, I don’t see him pulling it off. The apotheosis ritual is even more insane. And we have had a war already and the remaining gods aren’t too much in disunity so a continent level war seems even more unlikely.

    Ch 29 Method
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Moses_0

    Yeah, but I’m also wondering where Audrey is. How is Mr.fool’s superfan not involved in the plan. Or have they decided after a meeting or something taht Fors is the best mentor.

    Ch 28 Laws
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Mistdrop

    I think it might not sonic booms. Rather the whoosh sound. I don’t think a sequence 9 would be able to break the sound barrier.

    Ch 27 Five Changes
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to lvlZeroGamer

    I think the uncommon pathways might non- blasphemy slate pathways and also non divine pathways. meaning you reach angel at max and not reach god level. Or some kind debilitation. The mixing of pathways sounds interesting but it’s highly likely to turn someone into a monster, also, they would still be part of the 22 wouldn’t they?

    Ch 26 Whistleblowing
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Beni_Pasterus

    I think she only mentioned one sequence 0 - red priest. And as for how she knew bout the hunter, it’ possibly through Lucian’s description and divination.

    Ch 25 Sequences and Potions
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Black_Coffin

    Yeah. especially when he saw Klein. Even high sequence fate path beyonders didn’ want to see Klein.

    It has incredibly strong tracking abilities, and I can't discount the possibility that it possesses some sort of superpowers, much like Aurore…
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Purple_lily

    But I think aurore is likely sequence 9 or 8. we don’t know her pathway, so we can’t make guesses on her knowledge of acting method. But I’ glad they finally brought up Beyonder.

    Ch 21 Response
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Commented

    I’m still not sure on how aurore is a transmigrator. Is she was, wouldn’t she have ties to sefirah castle ?

    Ch 7 Naroka
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Singularity21
    Singularity211yr
    Replied to Blazing_Danitz

    I’m confused how a new path could exist. Don’t all paths originate from the original creator ? And since he awakened on earth, shouldn’t he have possessed all the paths ?

    Ch 5 Card
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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