Daoist626662

good concept bro continue onwards, update more if you want people to vote

i give you this review so that you may continue onwards towards a finished story

good concept bro if you wanna rank up update more, and find something to encurage readers to vote/review/comment on your story

good work my brother keep at it don't lose your motivation

*remove approach at the end of the paragraph

i personally think that when approching battle all for one does it best, he beats down his opponent mentally and physically and doesn't get involved unless neccesary, the bad thing about this for him is that he is inexpirienced relative to his age, he also likes to fight like an immovable object approach, thats why he got clocked in the head by all might

*supes

yeah bro this makes more sense, copy will be useless though unless he can use it on super, or he can use mahoraga's adaption to ad an aspect to it like sukuna did when he created the world cutting slash

ok now thats op it should have said limitless and six eyes though they are seperate techniques

bro please tell me he doesn't only have the six eyes its kinda mid on its own