Review Detail of Magical in Secrets of How the World Changed

The writing quality, I must say, is beyond decent than most of the authors here if we include the following: grammar and syntax (There are minor errors but I'm incredibly lenient for as long as it's understandable and readable at first glance), choice of punctuation and diction is exquisite. The flow, pacing of the story keeps you getting on your seat and engaged throughout the story. That said, It's not tad difficult to read and doesn't require much of an exposition and patch ups as you continue reading. The stability of updates, I have read this already prior to the author's announcement of revamping the chapters per se the contract guidelines. So there are things that had been transferred to the next chapter, chunked well, and whatnot. You can see that the author really puts up the utmost effort that it doesn't change the whole momentum of the story (which brings me to the next one: Story Development) For the story development, as I have said with the diction, he chose the appropriate words to describe how the story unfurled as we go deeper in it. (e.g. The cockroach scene) goodness, it gave me goosebumps trying to imagine once more. You can vividly imagine to the minute details. (Honestly I feel so traumatized and scarred for life, it's just that nasty of a description that will get you hooked!) The character design, I can say that it's not your typical, oversaturated grocery list type : this man is this, this, this, that, that so on and so forth. You can see how he implicitly describes the character, both physique and mental condition (e.g. not an athletic type), which gives you a brief idea on what he is. For the world background, It's apparently clear that it's in your typical dystopian apocalyptic setting, I guess he's still caught up to his own predicament as he look around. Is it a good start? Yes it is. Is it a slow world building? Not that I know of, as I have read thus far, only I can say just as much and I hope to look forward on this story. This is one of those game elements novels that you can read, it's worth a check. Things starts to get better and better and this review of mine will be subjected to change, as it deemed fit, as I continue.