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MysticAmy
MysticAmyLv124yr
2020-09-12 16:01

I am three chapters in, but I already decided to leave a review. I like the writing quality of this novel and how formal and at the same time entertaining this is! I may be an English teacher, but this is not a basis for me to say that I am great as I am fully aware to how other people can do better when it comes to narration and choice of words! 🀩 TBH, my style is simple and reading other authors’ work such as yours, helps me learn a lot of things! πŸ₯° Keep it up! I really like your figure of speeches and word choices~! And especially the FLOW and with how you described each scenes is remarkable! Update stability is good. I can really see you working hard, as you write for other stories as well~! I am still three chapters in, but I like the story development in this one. I could already say that your pacing would be good since we had a very exciting start that left us hanging and on the next chapters, we could already see the progress of how the story will be. I would have to read more so I could follow up on this part of the review. ^^ I absolutely LOVE the character design! 🀩 As your own version of the fairytale, this is something indeed unique to you which is a good share for the other readers! I love reading classics and you adding some characters to the story is a good take on your story! πŸ₯° Lastly, World Background. TBH, I would still have to read more so I could say something about this. Once I do, I would have to edit or recomment on my review. Overall, Rachel, I like the book and I would really continue reading this during my free time along with Moon Rabbit! πŸ₯° Keep up the it up! You’re already doing great and I know your works will be enjoyed by many! 🀩

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