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CailinMatthews
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2020-07-17 01:15

There is like... one chapter but IT'S SO GOOD! I feel like I'm on sugar high after reading. My eyes are shining right now. I did not expect such events. Yet, everything in it was meant to be there and flowed beautifully. If you could, skip the rest of this review and read it for yourself. I mean, just a few more tweaks and it can be a one-shot prompt. Lol. It's such a simple scene while having tea, an iconic attribute for Alice in Wonderland. Yet,,, I never seen such a unique way to have tea. It was one thing after another, keeping you on your toes. Then, it reveals the setting one by one and completely paints the picture of the current situation. 90% of my reaction is due to how blood pumping the writing was. The build up for an exciting adventure was well done. First chapters are hard and its rare for to be hooked this fast. I usually need to read more. But I'm telling you... if the rest of the story is anything like this chapter.... *whistles* it's gonna be one hell of a ride! As the title and synopsis says, this revolves around the Queen of Hearts! She surely knows what she wants She even manages to sneak in what her favorite food is. There's not much on the background story that led to this situation. I look forward to seeing both that and the future! I do want to add a bit more description at some things. I know she's the Queen of Hearts but I'd love to know how she looks like in the first chapter. Nonetheless, this doesn't waver the quality content it has!

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RachelRuth
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Thank you so much for the indepth and verbose review! OTL I could cry a river of tears now and I admit I am now nervous how the other chapters will now compare to the first one haha. They'll probably pale a bit in comparison since this one is quite magical~ Writing this first chapter is certainly a delight, even moreso because of such a favorable impression it left you! Thank you once again for the review! <3

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Was going to write this at a later chapter but felt like the author needed some encouragement (I want my daily updates ;-;) I would be lying to say that this was the first Alice in Wonderland adaptation that I have ever read or the first attempt to tell the story from the Red Queen's perspective. However, I would say that this story definitely stands out in its own way in that every detail hides a secret message and that every hidden message is potentially foreshadowing. In that sense, it's rare to find a Webnovel story with actual attention to world building and character development. The way the author is able to spin a known fictional world into her own with these subtle additions is in itself no small feat. Writing Quality: The prose is a bit flowery and admittedly a bit easy to get lost in (like please it's so pretty that you're like what plot 0.0) However, THIS STORY IS LITERALLY ABOUT WONDERLAND. Imagine a linear detailing of events with bare bone descriptions. Like please it's literally WONDERLAND flowery descriptions are a must ;-; Stability of Updates: Daily from what I have followed Story Development: Unfolding from a classic villainess rebirth, I think what is most exciting is definitely the way she then goes back and interacts with different elements. In contrast to most other novels, there's a crazy streak to her that tells of her erased "past" that will become her future. Character Design: Wonderland but with a twist (enough said lol) World Background: Probably the part I enjoy most about this novel. At the end of each chapter, the author gives a few details about how her interpretation weaves into and builds upon the original. And honestly it's so entertaining figuring out the bread crumb trail that she leaves. Anyways sorry for the long rant! But thank you so much for the story!!!

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