Review Detail of Pool in The Rise Of A Porter
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Novel, did indeed start off well, I myself, was very happy when the MC received a system, but it did get confusing since it was not mentioned how he had received it. You may say, maybe he had from before, then well, author, should have stated so and developed that part of the story. Also, main reason why I dropped it, was due to the fact, the MC goes on complaining and being angry at the whole system and this guild he is in, but then later on at the chapter, First Mission (1) and the two chapters before it, he gets first, absolutely demolished by some S+ ranks, like what did he expect when he was only a D rank, then after, he ends up ACCEPTING a job in the same f.ucking guild which he despises, and takes up the offer, even though, author, had said before that, ice types are rare, so he could have got a job some where else! Lastly, there is this fake build up of love, it has no real point, except from the reason that she was nice to the MC a couple of times, but didn't step in, ONCE, only standing by the stand lines and saying, oh no, stop that - picture that in a very quiet voice -, then she goes on later where I dropped it, t state at these 'muscles' of the MC, now don't get me wrong I'm not saying that muscles aren't attractive, but getting flushed after seeing a muscles that were hidden under a shirt? it doesn't make sense. Well that was my rant, it is a good novel, it's more just not for me, but maybe others may like it.
The Rise Of A Porter
AkshatArpit
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Thanks for the review! I appreciate your thoughts but the main reason he decided to stay in the guild was due to her sister. He wanted to leave the guild but couldn't because he won't be able to support her treatment and the private guilds would only take someone who was at least a rank D or rank C, but Arnold didn't have any issues with that. The problem was the lengthy recruitment process for the private guilds and he wouldn't have been able to carry on his sister's treatment during that time (mentioned in the later chapters) and thus he decided to stay with the same guild so that he could earn some money and then leave the guild once and for all (which he does in later chapters). But I appreciate your thoughts and decisions.
Thanks for the review! I appreciate your thoughts but the main reason he decided to stay in the guild was due to her sister. He wanted to leave the guild but couldn't because he won't be able to support her treatment and the private guilds would only take someone who was at least a rank D or rank C, but Arnold didn't have any issues with that. The problem was the lengthy recruitment process for the private guilds and he wouldn't have been able to carry on his sister's treatment during that time (mentioned in the later chapters) and thus he decided to stay with the same guild so that he could earn some money and then leave the guild once and for all (which he does in later chapters). But I appreciate your thoughts and decisions.
if you love systems everything you ranted about is a package deal with it.. of course you would come back. you must have had a bad day that day.
Pool:UPDATE: I have decided to pick this back up, if I find it intriguing I shall review it again
AkshatArpit:Thanks for the review! I appreciate your thoughts but the main reason he decided to stay in the guild was due to her sister. He wanted to leave the guild but couldn't because he won't be able to support her treatment and the private guilds would only take someone who was at least a rank D or rank C, but Arnold didn't have any issues with that. The problem was the lengthy recruitment process for the private guilds and he wouldn't have been able to carry on his sister's treatment during that time (mentioned in the later chapters) and thus he decided to stay with the same guild so that he could earn some money and then leave the guild once and for all (which he does in later chapters). But I appreciate your thoughts and decisions.