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Dayside
DaysideLv124yr
2020-10-05 06:14

Not very good to be honest. The main character is a complete idiot, there are so many freaking holes in the plot and stuff missing that should be there. The gacha system is completely idiotic, especially when you could just give him a free roll like once a day or week instead of bullshit quests like 'help your mother pass away peacefully' or someshit. For some reason the system even has a 'lovers' portion which again, is idiotic. His family is really poor, and his father looks super shady, and he's just doing nothing and is ignoring it all. He is a fucking piano grandmaster at a young age due to the system and does nothing to get at least enough money to get a better home for his family. He started reading at like age 2 and started studying a bunch of stuff he will never use, it's just beyond stupid. If you have nothing else to do, I suppose you can try reading it. If you do have anything else to read, read that. Oh yeah he's also 10 years old with no friends being mentioned at all.

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Daoist502988
Daoist502988Lv4

This is a story armor to be taken as a tutor for the five sisters.

JUST_A_NORMAL_GUY
JUST_A_NORMAL_GUYLv5

This is a fanfic in a world with different animes mixed together so it clearly won't have the same plot that the cannon, and the gacha thing, 1 per day is very op, even 1 per week is also op. Like 1 year there are around 52 weeks, so he could get very op and this story is romance/slice of life centered, not fighting or system centered so author doesn't want to make him op. The lovers part, it is just for us readers to remember the lovers if we somehow forget who where them since this story releases are irregular. The poor part thing, do you have a problem with poor people or what??? Uesugi and Nariyuki were both poor so this complain is just stupid. The having grandmaster piano skill, from what I know, being a pianist wouldn't help you gain too much money and if you are talking about street performance then, he is poor so he can't afford one. And the part were you criticize him studying, do you have a problem with people studying??? If you dislike studying then that is your problem, some people thinks about their future so just let them be. And no knowledge is useless unless the people who has it doesn't know how to use it well.

Dayside
DaysideLv12

You're so fucking stupid it hurts

JUST_A_NORMAL_GUY:This is a fanfic in a world with different animes mixed together so it clearly won't have the same plot that the cannon, and the gacha thing, 1 per day is very op, even 1 per week is also op. Like 1 year there are around 52 weeks, so he could get very op and this story is romance/slice of life centered, not fighting or system centered so author doesn't want to make him op. The lovers part, it is just for us readers to remember the lovers if we somehow forget who where them since this story releases are irregular. The poor part thing, do you have a problem with poor people or what??? Uesugi and Nariyuki were both poor so this complain is just stupid. The having grandmaster piano skill, from what I know, being a pianist wouldn't help you gain too much money and if you are talking about street performance then, he is poor so he can't afford one. And the part were you criticize him studying, do you have a problem with people studying??? If you dislike studying then that is your problem, some people thinks about their future so just let them be. And no knowledge is useless unless the people who has it doesn't know how to use it well.
10102020oo
10102020ooLv13

I don't think they're complaining about the mc being weak, rather how lost the mc is. The system is unnecessary as it doesn't assign worthwhile tasks with meaningful rewards. Lover's portion or whatever, grandmaster pianist and whatnot doesn't help the mc with his studies or life in general. The system should be guiding him towards success with simple support, whilst the mc does the rest. Figure out his future career path, earn money... More importantly, if there were more individual coverage over the mc's family members. Lest they're irrelevant.

JUST_A_NORMAL_GUY:This is a fanfic in a world with different animes mixed together so it clearly won't have the same plot that the cannon, and the gacha thing, 1 per day is very op, even 1 per week is also op. Like 1 year there are around 52 weeks, so he could get very op and this story is romance/slice of life centered, not fighting or system centered so author doesn't want to make him op. The lovers part, it is just for us readers to remember the lovers if we somehow forget who where them since this story releases are irregular. The poor part thing, do you have a problem with poor people or what??? Uesugi and Nariyuki were both poor so this complain is just stupid. The having grandmaster piano skill, from what I know, being a pianist wouldn't help you gain too much money and if you are talking about street performance then, he is poor so he can't afford one. And the part were you criticize him studying, do you have a problem with people studying??? If you dislike studying then that is your problem, some people thinks about their future so just let them be. And no knowledge is useless unless the people who has it doesn't know how to use it well.
K4sumig4ok4Utaha
K4sumig4ok4UtahaLv10

True

Autistically
AutisticallyLv13

so true 😂

Dayside:You're so fucking stupid it hurts
Pure_R18_Terror
Pure_R18_TerrorLv3

well that was harsh.......but I can't help but somewhat agree.

KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv4

it's been a year and I still don't get how did this guy miss the meaning on the review lol

JUST_A_NORMAL_GUY:This is a fanfic in a world with different animes mixed together so it clearly won't have the same plot that the cannon, and the gacha thing, 1 per day is very op, even 1 per week is also op. Like 1 year there are around 52 weeks, so he could get very op and this story is romance/slice of life centered, not fighting or system centered so author doesn't want to make him op. The lovers part, it is just for us readers to remember the lovers if we somehow forget who where them since this story releases are irregular. The poor part thing, do you have a problem with poor people or what??? Uesugi and Nariyuki were both poor so this complain is just stupid. The having grandmaster piano skill, from what I know, being a pianist wouldn't help you gain too much money and if you are talking about street performance then, he is poor so he can't afford one. And the part were you criticize him studying, do you have a problem with people studying??? If you dislike studying then that is your problem, some people thinks about their future so just let them be. And no knowledge is useless unless the people who has it doesn't know how to use it well.
AizenJabberwock
AizenJabberwockLv6

You are right on all accounts, I just started this fic earlier today and I immediately commented about how he wasted 3 years while his father broke his back doing shady stuff never being at home while he sat at home comfortably sitting on World class piano skills that could have netted him hundreds of millions of yens just because "he couldn't afford a piano", like, this is so stupid it truly hurts, he could have gone in a music shop, impress the owner, get a manager and bam! Family situation sorted, or even just ask for a sporadic basic music lesson, impress the teacher and once again it would have all been downhill to infinite glory and success from there, the way this talent was handled its simply beyond idiotic and if the author had this idea from the start, then he should delayed the time he received it to avoid the gigantic plot hole he jumped in head first, the excuse to keep the family poor to make him be a tutor of the sisters doesn't hold a candle because he could have just heard or seen their struggle as a passerby or classmate and take it from there without the money angle and just for the romantic one but noooo that would be too complicated to write now, wouldn't it? -_-" I honestly couldn't sit still watching him waste 3 whole years in which he could have gotten hundreds of proficiency points, money and fame for literally nothing, now even if he debuts nobody will know that he was so talented while being so young and all that prestige was literally poured down the drain, simply terrible. Anyway I wanted to add a like to your review but i see you got 69 of them so I'll hold back until some other uncultured man ruins it to do so. ;)

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DaoistNineCircles
DaoistNineCirclesLv1

A story with a good concept but meh execution. [>Writing Quality (4/5 Stars)<] - Best part of the novel. Although for OC it would be mediocre, for a fanfic it's not bad. A little dry for my tastes, but overall readable. [>Stability of Updates (4/5 Stars)<] - Not even finished yet so no complaints here, though I did hear that the author focuses more on his other story (the one with that focuses on Deku and friends) so that's a bit disappointing, as I find this one to be better, but oh well. [>Story Development (3/5 Stars)<] - Meh. Although it's a slice of life, it's a little too boring for me. The protagonist never fails at anything he does, and the only lost he's faced thus far was losing a grandmother. I like the idea of Gacha systems and slice of life anime crossover worlds, but this is too dry for my tastes with a lot of forced drama, especially with the blonde girl. She constantly thinks and hesitates because of her illness but the protagonist could just cure her. After all, if he ever needs something, he will coincidentally get it with the gacha, it's what happened with the senzu beans after all. [>Character Design (2/5 Stars)<] - Not a good protagonist for the harem genre. A little too passive for my tastes. Relationships barely progress, and when they do, we are only told these things in a summary, not actually seeing it. The entire relationship of the MC and Shouko was timeskips and him being her friend. I didn't like the chapter of Raku because I'm not here to see the protagonists interaction with other males, but with his harem that the author barely develops. I sincerely hope he doesn't follow the same path his other novel followed by focusing on other characters besides his main ones. Also removed a star for a child protagonist, not what I came for in a harem themed story. Inb4 "DONT THINK WITH YOUR D!!!" Lol. Then why did you write a harem? If I wanted to read about a passive Japanese beta male I'd go read light novels. Despite meeting a literal god and being gifted a system, he was shaking in his boots by mere mortal Yakuza. [>World Background (3/5 Stars)<] - Hardly any detail or information given to the world. Besides there being no magic and there being more females than males, I know nothing else of the world. What is the school like? What is the name of the school? Is it similar to Earth then? The world seemed to be very dry despite being an anime crossover. [>Summary<] - Good idea, not so great execution. Author creates passive protagonists, and personally we have many contrasting tastes, despite that I tried to make the review as logical as possible.

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