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SAGE
SAGELv23yr
2020-12-18 02:58

At first I liked the idea of building a souls society, but I don't like the idea of him being considerate of others even though he's a Shinigami

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Aizen_Dleitch
Aizen_DleitchAuthor

Because he considers her a friend????

SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3

no because he shows himself as a wuss, when ryujin ask him to be a balancer to the world but he is busy playing husband and wife with ino before getting revenge or growing more powerful... not that I hate romance but ur characterizing of ramance elements are too raw and rigid to get a feel in reading. and ur power level is shit for, cause ryujin's release forms fire had temperature of sun surface and u have shown kabuto just shirking that temperature as it was a breeze really didn't do well with me ... if u want to nerf a ability then just tell us he still hasn't learn it, why would u show the ability but only to nerf it and shit on the power.

Aizen_Dleitch
Aizen_DleitchAuthor

Ryujin Jakka in Bankai has the core temperature of the sun compressed into its blade. Ryujin Jakka in Shikai has a maximum temperature of around 5k Celcius. However, being a *Little Teenager with no experience using a Zanpakuto and technically cheating his way into Shika* means he will be weaker than an old man who is over 2 thousand years old using the same ability. Im sorry if you don't like that though.

SageOfSins:no because he shows himself as a wuss, when ryujin ask him to be a balancer to the world but he is busy playing husband and wife with ino before getting revenge or growing more powerful... not that I hate romance but ur characterizing of ramance elements are too raw and rigid to get a feel in reading. and ur power level is shit for, cause ryujin's release forms fire had temperature of sun surface and u have shown kabuto just shirking that temperature as it was a breeze really didn't do well with me ... if u want to nerf a ability then just tell us he still hasn't learn it, why would u show the ability but only to nerf it and shit on the power.
SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3

really?? that's your reason??? atleast give a real reason or just ignore the comments and just fucking drop ur fic...u fucking twat.

Aizen_Dleitch:Ryujin Jakka in Bankai has the core temperature of the sun compressed into its blade. Ryujin Jakka in Shikai has a maximum temperature of around 5k Celcius. However, being a *Little Teenager with no experience using a Zanpakuto and technically cheating his way into Shika* means he will be weaker than an old man who is over 2 thousand years old using the same ability. Im sorry if you don't like that though.
God_Of_Laziness
God_Of_LazinessLv3

He politely apologized to you and you say to watch his mouth? You need to get your brain fixed right away.

SageOfSins:really?? that's your reason??? atleast give a real reason or just ignore the comments and just fucking drop ur fic...u fucking twat.
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That1BoredWriter
That1BoredWriterLv3

Yeah, the insults weren't necessary. I think he just wanted to get a reaction out of him/her or something.

God_Of_Laziness:He politely apologized to you and you say to watch his mouth? You need to get your brain fixed right away.
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LightNeyer
LightNeyerLv1

I agree.

God_Of_Laziness:He politely apologized to you and you say to watch his mouth? You need to get your brain fixed right away.
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