If you like star was. i would definitely give this fanfic a try. so far its been a pleasure to read, so much so i ended up binging the entire thing into late in the night, so kudos to you author. also beware of some spoilers but i would like to give some opinion on what i think is good and what i think is bad, and potential changes if the author want to bother. Writing quality is good, while not perfect, it is leagues ahead of the average fanfic. so good job here Updates arent super fast. but makes up for it with usually quite long and good chapters. no chapters really strike me as "filler" chapters where nothing really happens. so good job here aswell Story not exactly super unique. it follows a story which most of us a probably familiar with, making it easy to follow along. my current biggest gripe is the very glossed over star forge. this structure is very unique and very dangerous. (a bit of random star wars trivia for those interested.) --the star forge was made by "the builders" which by design is rather cruel and savage. since the star forge uses the force, it slowly inherited these traits and became a super powerful dark force artifact. which will corrupt any creature that is close for an extended period of time. -- mixed bag but still good characters i liked it a bit better earlier where we had some comic relief? with his squad and cousin talking and drinking. i would like that to show up a bit more from time to time. the only really developed character is the mc. the author can kinda get away with this. since we know pretty much everyone mentioned so far, because of the the films. to this im pretty neutral. world. star wars world. a classic and very expansive plenty of interesting things to take from. i enjoy kingdom building very much. so the early chapters spent on building up his first planet was quite enjoyable. generally i would still call this pretty good. some general thoughts. the fanfic is solid. however as a general theme. the novel goes very fast. i really want a bit more detail on some things, which could help fill out a bit where there is "time skip" this fanfic is also very comparable to the legendary mechanic, so if you like that novel, you will feel right at home here. i enjoy the mcs almost omnipotent way of handling himself, keeping both the sith and jedi on their toes a few other notes. the ships ive seen some people complain that they make no sense if you arent really into star wars trivia, im inclined to agree so my suggestion would be to use more broad and general terms fx. "type-dreadnaught heavily armed and armored with a massive 600000tonnes displacement" or something similar goodluck with your fanfic, i will continue reading
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"this fanfic is also very comparable to the legendary mechanic" That was all you needed to say for me to give this a try. It's sad how legendary mechanic only has 4.5 stars on this site, while other unreadable garbage have better ratings. Legendary mechanic is so fucking epic, especially later on.
