Item: The Wound In The Stars
Rating: 2.4
Author: SageOfSins

SageOfSinsLv34yr

2020-11-22 03:19

quality: few mistakes other than that good but could use some rythm to get reading flow better. plot: corny, crinchy and not good needs lot of work ....more foreshadowing then actual plot. character: not relatable and bit egoistic with lots of contradicting attitude as well as skill that are OP gets nerf on this MC. update: update stability for webnovel it is fine in efficiency. world background: lots of guesses done that has gotten the world view bit messed up but overall good... **: should edit some of MC's attitude toward manipulation, as he doesn't like it but only to get drunk (as he could with wolverine healing factor and high adabelity) doesn't really show his motive. And small stuffs like this doesn't help in fleshing out the MC, instead ruins the whole chirade.

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