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CrazedreaderLv144yr
2021-02-12 02:09

Yeah I'm 20 chapters in, the story's good, but the writting sucks. A lot. It's not the grammar, somehow or other people's name are switched, POV messed up, incomplete paragraph or sentence, it's like the manuscript was written on paper, shot at repeatedly, then scanned along with the holes. Some part are simply missing. So yeah I'll leave this for a while and come back later to see if it's fixed. If not then I won't bother continuing, cause it makes less sense than MTLs. My brain cells are not cheap.

A Villainess Should Be Strong

illeannne
4.7
196 Chs

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illeannne
illeannneAuthor

AHAHAHAHAH I LOVE HOW YOU DESCRIBED THE STATE OF MY WORK And yeah, I do have troubles with consistency and clarity. The incomplete paragraphs are from when I stop writing periodically to take a rest (?) POV messed up? Eh? But it's only in third person O_O People's name switched.. Um, yeah, no excuse for that :facepalm: Your last sentence sounds like you're willing to give this work another chance >////< On that note I really do need to get an editor don't I *sigh* Thank you for reading this story, I'll try to fix your troubles as much as I can. My editors are my readers NGL I hope you do come back in the future hihi Happy Chinese New Year!

4yr
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illeannne
illeannneAuthor

Ok so apparently this is a thing so don't mind if I do 👀👀 I'm the author of this story, of course I'm going to be biased and give it a 5 stars rating! Feel free to use this review as a way of communication, I will try my best to answer questions posted under this. Please give this story a chance!!

4yr

tyacia_thompson
tyacia_thompsonLv1

I came from Wattpad to support🙌🏾. Your writing is really good, keep it up. I love the story so far too. I’m at the ch40 from what you had previously and I can’t wait for more!

4yr
vilyciowinata
vilyciowinataLv1

This novel is soooooo gooooddddddd! For those who doesn’t read this yet, you are literal loss. You problably would never regret reading this novel. Once more, you should fcking read it and give this crazy talented author a 5 stars

4yr
Duckfero
DuckferoLv4

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3yr
Storag
StoragLv13

Sadly, this novel turned out a rather disappointing read. The start was strong and promising with solid writing and good pacing, but the further the story progresses the worth it gets: the author tries to play around with time gimmicks but ends up messing the timeline, writing gets worth with sentences often left unfinished, characters suddenly exhibit inconsistent behaviours, the scenes often contradict prior ones. The degree may vary from minor details like a character that left the room still participating in a dialogue to major stuff involving the whole plot. There's also an issue with author piling up "mysteries" without ever resolving any of them. Even the titular "villainess" status is made into a mystery and left unaddressed.

4yr
john_smith_5446
john_smith_5446Lv3

I don’t actually like this book that much. it’s kind of messy and uncoherent, and the plot and character development are lacking. However, it isn’t terrible either, so the most i would say is that it’s boring.

4yr
yvekat
yvekatLv10

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4yr
ssscarlettt
ssscarletttLv10

To be fair, I know the author so my review will be pretty biased.. I've read the version over on Wattpad. I can tell you that the she has made significant progress. The previous one was so rushed. She told me that she planned on wrapping it up early, so I understand why the pacing was like that. This version is easier to swallow, and the conflicts that'll happen will hopefully be resolved without rushing. Her grammar has improved by a lot. The previous one was readable, but this one is much more pleasing to read. The only thing I would critique is the overuse of commas. The sentences are very long, it may not be to everyone's tastes. The romance got cut down (?) I haven't seen any of the boys appear although it's been 35 chapters. Not a bad thing though. Keep up the good work :)) P.S: Now you don't have to think about the chapter names anymore do you??? HMMM???

4yr
Chinnu_002
Chinnu_002Lv3

Hi guys,the writing style and plot line of this novel is seriously solid...I read a few chapters first and now I am unable to stop reading..the work is too good...keep updating..we want more chapters from you..,💚

4yr
ireneneneneenenenn
ireneneneneenenennLv1

OMGGGG this novel is SOOOOO gooodd!!! I've never read a webnovel with this much detail😍. The story is incredibly unique and interesting! I've been reading this since it was still on Wattpad and I'm still not bored of it!! And also congrats to the author for joining webnovel!!🥳🥳

4yr
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