The writing is just ok for a webnovel fanfic . Nothing write home about but better then large portion of fanfics on this website. The story development, character design, and world building are complicated to rate because as fanfics they lean heavily on the source material. Usually just following the original story beet for beet , This fanfic has the main character dropped in a testing facility. Funnily enough this his a incredibly common trope within mha fanfics, ‘ surgeon in mha,’ off the top of my head. The characters are completely unlike able including the mc. I don’t care about any of the characters. World building in the fanfic is non existent. I don’t even know what the test subjects are. Are they clones or just kids that picked up from nowhere. Which leads more questions on Why the scientists are testing on children. What faction do they belong to? Is it new or old? Questions not answered satisfactory. There’s a trope in mha fanfics that I mentioned earlier on in the review. The mc being included into some organization that trains kids in their quirks In groups, for some unknown reason even though it makes no sense in mha.
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Wasn't hawks literally trained and raised by the government in mha to be a hero because of his quirk?
