BankruptMonkee

Lets say what your saying is true. Why is Goku so different from other saiyans? Is it because he was raised by humans? Now let me ask you this, what is Nathan? Nathan is a HUMAN reincarnated into a saiyan, and hes barely even had contact with any saiyans, besides maybe briefly. None of your points even makes sense. Saiyans have friends, and Nathan is a human inside of a saiyan body.

Nice Chapter, really glad things turned out alright, and that he cemented her love for her. Something i'd like to see is Nathan getting more male friends. So far his only actual friends are all female, with pretty much all the males he knows being coworkers, or people he only occasionally talks to.

I conceed that would be a good combination. But im personally waiting for ice boy and lava girl.

Idk about that chief. Having two kekkai genkai is rare enough, but four? Naw I can't see that happening at all. Shikotsumyaku is supposed to be rare even among the Kaguya clan. I think that most likely the kid will get two at best. Or they will have multiple kids each with a seperate kekkai genkai? Also I feel like if he were to make one of his kids a jinchuuriki, I think that it would be best to spread the power out.

Plagiarism is one of the worst things an author can commit. Why would you defend that?

I just don't understand why Ozpin would make a chesspiece specifically for Ray*

Also, it was never even proven if Hidan couldn't die from old age.

Hidan literally sacrifices people to a blood thirsty god, and hidan had to use a forbidden jutsu that turned him into a freak made of hair. Why would tsunade do either of these things? Shes literally in her 50's by the time canon starts. You seem to forget that tsunade may look young for her age, but that is mostly due to a henge she keeps up. She most likely won't be hokage, and unless mc can use talk no jutsu on Tsunade, she will most likely end up continuing to be a drinker and gambler for the rest of her days.

But yeah, I think continuing this would be pointless. Were justing going back and forth at this point. Goodluck with this novel death. And remember, I will be watching.

Another way of watching would be throwing him in a cell for the rest of his life.