The writing is just ok for a webnovel fanfic . Nothing write home about but better then large portion of fanfics on this website. The story development, character design, and world building are complicated to rate because as fanfics they lean heavily on the source material. Usually just following the original story beet for beet , This fanfic has the main character dropped in a testing facility. Funnily enough this his a incredibly common trope within mha fanfics, ‘ surgeon in mha,’ off the top of my head. The characters are completely unlike able including the mc. I don’t care about any of the characters. World building in the fanfic is non existent. I don’t even know what the test subjects are. Are they clones or just kids that picked up from nowhere. Which leads more questions on Why the scientists are testing on children. What faction do they belong to? Is it new or old? Questions not answered satisfactory. There’s a trope in mha fanfics that I mentioned earlier on in the review. The mc being included into some organization that trains kids in their quirks In groups, for some unknown reason even though it makes no sense in mha.

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Really loved the story, writing style is much more refined and refreshing and first 3 chapters were enough to hook me in. Hope you see this novel through.

Story is very indulging, Powers given to mc does not seem very op and i would love to see how author will develop these powers. Comedy is good and mc does not seem fake.

A good read.....I think. Honestly I won't keep reading bcause I found it boring. MC woke up in a experimental facility and 40 chapters later he finally was able to escape but some kids died. MC is weak right now and there wasn't much development on his powers. I just can't get into this as I thought I would!🤷🏽‍♂️ Not a good review but whatever, bite me.

I am making this review because I feel like a lot of points in the bad reviews (the ones that actually give reasons) aren't necessarily the most accurate. One of the ones that doesn't make sense to me is the point of not knowing why they are in a testing facility when this is explained in later chapters. Another one I see is that the mc doesn't try to kill his 'father' as soon as they reincarnate, which is a pretty dumb reason cause the mc isn't just the strongest as soon as he reincarnates. To wrap up this review if you want a instantly op mc, to get all information right away, or no plot besides from the canon story then this isn't for you. But if you want an mc that actually has to try to get power, to have to wait to piece together the bigger point, and original content as well as main story then this is for you.

I am a fan of your works so I hope this will be just as good if not better so far I love the setting the whole lab rat have a lot of potential I do love harem but for this world think its better to be like your fairy tail fic and have one girl hopefully Nejire Hado or a MILF but that's just my personal preference keep up the good work looking forward to what it becomes

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i Wish I could say something good about the novel but right now I don't have any reasons to do so, I hope it becomes better with a little bit of plot and character development but for now it is what it is. Also the food that Grand Torino always eats is called Taiyaki, Teriyaki is the fucking sauce.