Review Detail of Adrianix1234 in Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]
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To be honest it had a great start, the story was good, characters and everything feels real, wishes are good, but then suddenly everything changed at chapter 61-62 so basically mc “killed” Nie li, but the truth is that he only deleted his memories, but as you know people with amnesia are still alive, so what does he do? He made him a “clone” giving him all his memories, i wouldn’t be so mad about it but suddenly Nie li (clone) wants to flirt with Yang Xin... you know were this is going right? Mc alredy has Ye Ziyun and Xiao Ninger as fiances and mc for some stupid reason made the promise that he won’t add more people to his harem... (i wouldnt be mad if it was true that like he said was for love but is obviously not for his idea) but obviously as a reader we thought that it would be the tpical were the love interest would try to convince the fiance to join mc harem, but he suddenly mc gome with the great idea to make clones of himself (that basically are are others people body and souls with his memories) to take the waifus for him, because he can’t break the promise... This left me with a feeling of NTR so strong i don’t want to keep reading. he probably won’t change it because he has advanced chapters in patreon and chapter 69 (nice) is supposed to be lemon between Nie Li x Yang Xin, bro if mc wants waifus be a man and not make “clones”... the worst part is that the story was extremely good and now i have to drop it
Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]
Wise_Snail
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Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.
if you read Desolate Era you'll know even though its clone it still the same as MC, when MC do it himself, I make Desolate Era as ex. because how he is so devoted to his love interest
Wise_Snail:Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.
Author can't you make the connect to one conscious again after he cultivates to a certain level? Then he can be one person that have multiple bodies.
Wise_Snail:Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.
Livergut:Author can't you make the connect to one conscious again after he cultivates to a certain level? Then he can be one person that have multiple bodies.
Im pretty sure what bothers people is that the clones have a different body and look like someone other than him
Wise_Snail:Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.
Bruh, clone's are one of the most hated thing's ever! How did you never heard of that or thought of that?! Yuri is hated too btw, not only Yaoi. Well, NTR is obvious.
Wise_Snail:Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.
Good to hear, Im looking forward another novel. Still keep this one in the library so I can follow on when you start a new novel but unfortunately I cannot read this one.
Wise_Snail:Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.
Still Confusing me, think about it if the clone have a son you can't say they not relate right and what happen if the clone son and daughter fell in love
Wise_Snail:Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.
Yuri is hit or miss if its between harem members but clones are only for ntr lovers sadly I loved the story till the author ruined it with clones
Kokushibou:Bruh, clone's are one of the most hated thing's ever! How did you never heard of that or thought of that?! Yuri is hated too btw, not only Yaoi. Well, NTR is obvious.
clones are complicated matter, it's not as baf as NTR. but it's just messy and made the focus of story all over the place. Even if it just 'another limbs'.
Wise_Snail:Well, thank you for reading so far. Like I already said, it's my first time writing something so I already expected to make a lot of mistakes. I knew that there were taboo things like NTR or Yaoi, but I didn't know that clones were also taboo. At least I won't make the same mistake when I write my next story. If I use clones to court some girls, they will be "connected" to the original, like additional limbs, as I understood what really bothers people in the clone thing is that they have their own free will/soul. I can't change the chapters as I really want to finish this fanfic. If I were to change some contents, I would have to carefully edit a dozen of chapters and I may get bored and drop the story by then. That's why, thanks for your comments.
Yes but yuri shouldn’t be villified unless you’re really insecure, inexperienced or overly possessive. Unless your women are spending so much time together alone without you, then I can see that being a problem. But if there is a harem, and you are with multiple of your women, do you expect them to just be off to the side playing with themselves or patiently waiting while you are finishing with others? No, because that’s stupid. So stop being haters
Kokushibou:Bruh, clone's are one of the most hated thing's ever! How did you never heard of that or thought of that?! Yuri is hated too btw, not only Yaoi. Well, NTR is obvious.