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Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv154yr
2021-01-23 04:40

this is one of my favorite webnovels I've read on the app, unlike a lot of novels that simply throw the mc into life & death situations, without any kind of daily living, which reduces the humanity of the mc and supporting cast; the author gives proper pauses for the growth of the character and daily situations that add to the microcosm which is MC's life. (sorry for the run-on sentence)The best of novels have a healthy dose of smut, and your *** scenes and intimacy portrayed are really well written and it don't feel like you're forcing yourself out of your element. props! I'm ngl I'm glad you cut off the relationship his first gf, instead of following the trope of mc needing to become stronger to protect his woman or needing to reach a certain level of strength to be able to meet her again which honestly gets really old, when you read a dozen novels that have that trope. thank you for writing your noveland I look forward to seeing where your characts go, and how it ends.

Rebirth of the Phoenix God

MotivatedSloth
4.7
196 Chs

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MotivatedSloth
MotivatedSlothAuthor

Bad news for you, this novel is aimed at having eight to nine tomes, so it will take you a while to reach the final conclusion :D

4yr
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15

🤩🤩🤩 ooh lala, well hopefully nothing happens to you in the coming years as you write this novel ♥️

4yr
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Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelLv15

Great Novel. The story gets more intriguing, the more it progresses. Although there are not many chapters yet, from what I've seen, it's better than most novels here and good enough to hook someone. I like strong MCs and so good to see one here. I can only hope that it gets better and better as time progresses. The release rate and the grammar both are good as well. I'm amazed at how you dish out so many chapters a day, man. Have some rest once in a while :p Great work, though.

4yr

TrueDawn
TrueDawnLv13

To those who are just starting to read this, you're missing out on a lot on this novel. First of all, this novel was made by the Sloth himself, and contrary ot his pseudonym, he never fails to deliver daily updates with great quality. Second of all, the plot of the story. Think cultivation mixed with western fantasy, that's what this novel is all about. I'll just tell you that because it's better for you to start reading it. Lastly, he has put in a lot of effort into this. The worldbuilding is insane, the lore is also insane, even if you think that there's a plothole in the story, you'll find out that it's not a plothole in the first place. What are you waiting for? Go read the novel!

4yr
mrmrcia
mrmrciaLv10

Reveal spoiler

4yr
BoazX
BoazXLv4

I've tried it cause it had good reviews but its realy not good the characters and the world realy everything is just obscure and doesn't make sense the pacing is off the mc is all over the place with obscure personality and tha's just the start even the world that i thought will intersting was done in the most idiotic of ways. realy cant recommend it sorry

4yr
reqrwq2
reqrwq2Lv3

This novel may not have the action young master troupe from the get go like chinese novel, what it has is the harem vibe. Girls will fall into MC'c lap no question asked. A damn priest girl will get all touchy touchy with MC. And MC will flirt even after watching his master who took care of him from childhood and his first love to get tortured and burnt to death by the same church of the priest girl. MC don't feel like a normal human ****. As much as author tries to take pride in saying that the novel is slow paced with great world building, all that explanations appears to be introduction of a wet dream romance of a horny **** where he would have harem of girls with different character like one horny, one innocent nerd.... etc.

4yr
sumwale
sumwaleLv14

Well I tried hard on this one but gave up. The story, world background etc is intriguing. But the writing is simply hard to follow. Events are only partially described, the pacing is fast and haphazard, and it is quite hard to follow the events while only an overview can be grasped. The MC is like dazed most of the time whether the start of the book, middle or even the latest chapters. The main problem is that I as a reader is also dazed most of the time as the events are described in that "dazed" manner. Overall though I cannot pinpoint exactly all the issues with the writing, it was taking too much of my brain where I expect easy to follow stuff in these web novels. And frankly this is the first time I encountered such a situation in a web novel. It could be a problem with me, so I would still say try out 20 chapters or so before deciding but personally I cannot recommend this one.

4yr
Thee_AngryBird
Thee_AngryBirdLv5

I got this 😂😂😂🤣🤣😂😂🤣🤣💩😂💩😂🤣😂💩💩😂🔥😂🔥💩🤣😂😂🤣😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥

3yr
Little_Lost_Turtle
Little_Lost_TurtleLv15

Beginning few chapters are a bit rough. dynamic and flow is fast but they are solid explaining what needs to be said. The World setting is unquie and I am enjoying this quite a lot while only brig about 41 chapters into the story. The writing style is almost done classicialy with typically printed books. a little rushed but with daily updates happening I don't blame the author. Writing style and Descriptions of the Settings are perfect. Such as things are seen as per the Character not so much like as if you were to hit pause and and do a 360 look around. Author is keeping MC on track and while I can say from what I seen Plot armor is thick yet transparent, it is explained simply as it should be. Following that thought what story isn't heavy with it. As of now from what I have seen this book is well written and not very many grammatical errors are present. So A+ there. All worlds take time to Develope and with the MC being from a small village and no real knowledge of outside world he paces along nicely. Keep it up.

4yr
RetMod
RetModLv4

I line the concept and the powerful MC Pros: - Powerfull MC (what is more powerfull then a Phoenix) - Rich world building - Good Charakter building - Nice Lemons - Beta to Alpha MC Cons: - Alot info and monologs which gets boring at times - Alot of girls are really thirsty and jump our lead if they get the chance (maybe because his bloodline?) - Thick Plotarmor but in the and still a good novel that is worth your time

2yr
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