Item: Serendipity - A wink from the fate
Rating: 4.6
Author: Drakonous

DrakonousLv114yr

2020-08-10 14:53

A refreshing romance story that could easily be scripted into a TV series. Author did a great job in that perspective as I was about to imagine to scenes vividly. The characters are interesting and the pacing is smooth and easy. I think the only problem, and what docked a few points in my review, are the grammar errors. There are missing articles (a, an, the) in front of nouns and commas missing before or after names. Unfortunately, it breaks the immersion as I'd find myself constantly pausing and re-reading a sentence to find out what was missing. To the author, the simplest way to fix these errors is to get Grammarly. It comes with a Google Chrome extension which works with inkstone, meaning you can edit it in your browser and update it instantly, all from webnovel's platform. Other than that, the story was great. It's sweet and lighthearted and actually kinda soothing, cleansing for the soul. Especially after watching or playing a round of depressing or high ******* movies or games

Serendipity - A wink from the fate

Readoholic

4.8

57 Chs

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ReadoholicAuthor

Thanks a lot. I will take your suggestion make the changes soon. But i am glad that you like my story. Really appreciate your review. :)

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