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2021-04-10 04:02

its goooooooooooddd Translation Quality: I can read it just fine. Updating Stability: uh um... hmmm i- 4-5 stars? I cant put 4.5 soo yeah. Its alright its not like everyday but its not that long of a wait ish... Story development: i can see good potential like the snake pits growth, the meeting with the other people who reincarnated into the new world, or just how she is a monster(snake) in a dungeon(?) i forgot some details not the brightest mind here. Also so far so good. Oh and i cant forget that wasp arc thingy... potential ml? Ehhhh?👀 Character Design: uh nice its pretty cool. Its a nice twist that the kids teacher became their system. Also at the beginning, whats up with that dude who killed all the other students like that shii was crazy. It was not truck-kun, no it was a mf crazy stuckup prince syndrome guy who killed bc huh? I dont rmb the details no more but gosh darn does that still ring a bell World background: umm its a world.. a fantasy world mind you soo uh details? Dont rmb them.. i think its pretty structured i think... yeah Anywho overall rate it’ll say 4.4 BUT i personally think its either a 4.4-4.5 ... sooo yup so its a recommended from me eee

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