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BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv154yr
2020-11-11 19:21

I dropped at chapter 1 dialogue is terrible and inconsistent the cat says MC is a great artist then says he is d class and c class being able to draw a perfect picture ( totally idiotic due to paintings and drawings being based upon a person's perspective and it's history)

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BlankSlate
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and you're totally idiotic because if you looked forward 7 chapters and you would see that he clearly was deemed to be a C-class artist. but I guess that's too hard for you to do. Also, that's the cats personality. (To downplay)

BrianG9677
BrianG9677Lv15

if a writer can't catch the attention of their readers due to either inconsistent and or poor writing. Don't blame it on the readers for not continuing to read the story.

BlankSlate:and you're totally idiotic because if you looked forward 7 chapters and you would see that he clearly was deemed to be a C-class artist. but I guess that's too hard for you to do. Also, that's the cats personality. (To downplay)
Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15

Sorry your story just isnt good man

BlankSlate:and you're totally idiotic because if you looked forward 7 chapters and you would see that he clearly was deemed to be a C-class artist. but I guess that's too hard for you to do. Also, that's the cats personality. (To downplay)
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