Item: Artist's Journey In Another World!
Rating: 2.4
Author: VictoriousHermit

VictoriousHermitLv104yr

2020-10-07 21:00

I'm not a fan so forgive me if I'm unnecessarily harsh also I'm not great at reviews and if you do decide to read i hope you enjoy. ------------------------------- The Story starts with our protagonist dying because god was skipping rocks and killed him and the system is like "oh no, Anyway". He is then given a choice between traveling the world or opening a shop and he has to make it in 90 seconds. Regardless of what he chooses he has to go to Origin city or something to do his artist exam to start off as a D grade artist. The oh so quirky and lovable system lily the white cat doesn't give him supplies or the money to take the exam but she decides in the moment to give him a half god item or something.(shape-shifting brush) He says some fake things that turn out true and takes the exam and is mistaken for being from somewhere by fake thing turned true. Stuff happens and he's elevated to C grade but a girl 1 year younger then him is at least a B grade so he wants to work harder. this is a lot of rambling ------------------------------- The characters don't connect to me and come off as annoying and unbearable. I read like 3-4 chapters in and it hasn't pulled me in at all and i know next to nothing. The main character also isn't interesting with him being the best artist or something at 16 years old in his old world and he also gets pushed around by the system and barely complains. Also please don't give me or others negatives comments just ask them to put something similar to what i did at the beginning Thanks for reading this cluster feck

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