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aacef3fee7
aacef3fee7Lv14yr
2020-09-19 22:31

Really hope nnone buy privilege. Author is complete liar. All promises are broken the day they are given. Story is almost repeat of the first book which was dropped because author didnt get enough money after all shit he gave his readers. Too much cliche and cliffs.

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KillerHemboy
KillerHemboyAuthor

Hey, I was busy cos of some unanticipated circumstances. Promises still stand: 60 will be out by end of month.

Sora11
Sora11Lv5

When will you restart age of teras?

KillerHemboy:Hey, I was busy cos of some unanticipated circumstances. Promises still stand: 60 will be out by end of month.
Pretend
PretendLv3

sadly most likely never, he gave up on that book I think

Sora11:When will you restart age of teras?
Shin07
Shin07Lv3

I BELIEVE IN KILLERHEMBOY HE IS BEST WRITER love your books and i will forever wait patently for more chapters

KillerHemboy:Hey, I was busy cos of some unanticipated circumstances. Promises still stand: 60 will be out by end of month.
mack12109
mack12109Lv15

No Chapters in months, feel silly for reading world domination system, gIven thiS is the result. stuff happens but atleast let readers know what they can expect or why there are no updates

Shin07
Shin07Lv3

first of all shut the **** up he finished the first book and this second one is nothing like it and how would you even tell? this is only a hundred chapters his first is over 1000

Bladedsquirrel1
Bladedsquirrel1Lv15

id agree however there has been nothing saying why this one hasnt gone further and i really want to see more at moment i have gone to other books that are still being regularly updated... however i really want more of this as i can see it being amazing if regular updates

Shin07:first of all shut the **** up he finished the first book and this second one is nothing like it and how would you even tell? this is only a hundred chapters his first is over 1000
Shin07
Shin07Lv3

ah yes it is such a sad sight i love this authors work i check almost everyday for activity from him i wish i knew why he wasn't still posting chapters

Bladedsquirrel1:id agree however there has been nothing saying why this one hasnt gone further and i really want to see more at moment i have gone to other books that are still being regularly updated... however i really want more of this as i can see it being amazing if regular updates
TrevorTNT
TrevorTNTLv15

What happened why a haven't you updated anything for half a year and didnt leave a message that us who aren't spending 20$ a month can see if you left it on the privilege chapters?!?

KillerHemboy:Hey, I was busy cos of some unanticipated circumstances. Promises still stand: 60 will be out by end of month.
StoneBlown
StoneBlownLv15

Any knowledge on when you will return and resume this novel?

KillerHemboy:Hey, I was busy cos of some unanticipated circumstances. Promises still stand: 60 will be out by end of month.
C_523
C_523Lv15

you good bro? you been gone awhile...

John_stubing
John_stubingLv12

What gives Hemboy? Will we ever know what happens to Angaria and the Godking? If you’re going to abandon the story do the honorable thing and let the fans know so they can grieve for their wasted time and missed story, and move on.

mack12109
mack12109Lv15

How bout u shut the **** up, theres been so many chapters recently right? ****ing Dumb***. maybe if u werent too busy sack riding, ud realize that The two books are instrincally linked, and i was Stating my opinion. but, in the meantime **** u.

Shin07:first of all shut the **** up he finished the first book and this second one is nothing like it and how would you even tell? this is only a hundred chapters his first is over 1000
TrevorTNT
TrevorTNTLv15

Are you still alive?

KillerHemboy:Hey, I was busy cos of some unanticipated circumstances. Promises still stand: 60 will be out by end of month.
Jacob_Kosterman
Jacob_KostermanLv15

come on now, I love your books...... KEEP WRITING BRO!!! 😔

Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv14

Bro you okay? Since you haven’t updated the story for more then 9 months... does that mean it’s dropped????? 😐😐👁👄👁😭

KillerHemboy:Hey, I was busy cos of some unanticipated circumstances. Promises still stand: 60 will be out by end of month.
JKingSniper
JKingSniperLv6

He wasn't replying to u

mack12109:How bout u shut the **** up, theres been so many chapters recently right? ****ing Dumb***. maybe if u werent too busy sack riding, ud realize that The two books are instrincally linked, and i was Stating my opinion. but, in the meantime **** u.
Marwolaeth117
Marwolaeth117Lv15

bruh, I wait for the story to update because it was taking forever ,but it's been over a year since the last update? and no word from Hemboy? is he dead? is there a way we can find out if he's dead?? does webnovel not have a system in place to let readers know if the author of a book literally dies? seems like a necessary feature.... some people are gonna keep getting upset

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RedGunner
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I did not read the prequel book and I am starting with this, this is my first book of this author. Author mentioned in the note that you need not necessarily need to read the prequel of this. So this is for all those readers who come expecting something and reading this for the first time with no prior knowledge of his previous books. Author, I felt like cheated when I started reading this story, first of all, the things that are promised in the tags are barely in the story. In the tags, it's said there is a System, Reincarnation and adventure. Yes, this story has a system and its barely present, 56 chapters completed and I rarely see anything about the system. Reincarnation- yes it's a story on reincarnation but no one has a proper clue on what's happening, even the MC doesn't. When I come to the adventure tag, I barely see any adventure in this story. The progress of the plot is dead slow and that's not what you like in a story with adventure. I like the story but it doesn't give anything promised from the tags you put. I like the combination of Reincarnation and system but this story does exactly the opposite of what the reader comes here for after looking at the tags. Writing quality is good, the plot is good but the problem for its low views is that everyone who reads the synopsis and tags comes with an expectation and after reading you will find out that its completely serious story with barely any system and adventure. All those five-star reviews are mostly from the Authors previous readers who like this style and has some knowledge, but for me, it's completely opposite to my tastes. I am dropping this and I hope the author doesn't get offended by my criticism.

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