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TheActualGod
TheActualGodLv153yr
2021-08-01 02:57

KillerHemboy is back! He posted an update in this novel. He might continue this novel at the beginning of 2022. idk. Just glad to know he's not dead.

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RedGunner
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I did not read the prequel book and I am starting with this, this is my first book of this author. Author mentioned in the note that you need not necessarily need to read the prequel of this. So this is for all those readers who come expecting something and reading this for the first time with no prior knowledge of his previous books. Author, I felt like cheated when I started reading this story, first of all, the things that are promised in the tags are barely in the story. In the tags, it's said there is a System, Reincarnation and adventure. Yes, this story has a system and its barely present, 56 chapters completed and I rarely see anything about the system. Reincarnation- yes it's a story on reincarnation but no one has a proper clue on what's happening, even the MC doesn't. When I come to the adventure tag, I barely see any adventure in this story. The progress of the plot is dead slow and that's not what you like in a story with adventure. I like the story but it doesn't give anything promised from the tags you put. I like the combination of Reincarnation and system but this story does exactly the opposite of what the reader comes here for after looking at the tags. Writing quality is good, the plot is good but the problem for its low views is that everyone who reads the synopsis and tags comes with an expectation and after reading you will find out that its completely serious story with barely any system and adventure. All those five-star reviews are mostly from the Authors previous readers who like this style and has some knowledge, but for me, it's completely opposite to my tastes. I am dropping this and I hope the author doesn't get offended by my criticism.

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