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RedGunner
RedGunnerLv34yr
2020-07-29 16:23

I did not read the prequel book and I am starting with this, this is my first book of this author. Author mentioned in the note that you need not necessarily need to read the prequel of this. So this is for all those readers who come expecting something and reading this for the first time with no prior knowledge of his previous books. Author, I felt like cheated when I started reading this story, first of all, the things that are promised in the tags are barely in the story. In the tags, it's said there is a System, Reincarnation and adventure. Yes, this story has a system and its barely present, 56 chapters completed and I rarely see anything about the system. Reincarnation- yes it's a story on reincarnation but no one has a proper clue on what's happening, even the MC doesn't. When I come to the adventure tag, I barely see any adventure in this story. The progress of the plot is dead slow and that's not what you like in a story with adventure. I like the story but it doesn't give anything promised from the tags you put. I like the combination of Reincarnation and system but this story does exactly the opposite of what the reader comes here for after looking at the tags. Writing quality is good, the plot is good but the problem for its low views is that everyone who reads the synopsis and tags comes with an expectation and after reading you will find out that its completely serious story with barely any system and adventure. All those five-star reviews are mostly from the Authors previous readers who like this style and has some knowledge, but for me, it's completely opposite to my tastes. I am dropping this and I hope the author doesn't get offended by my criticism.

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KillerHemboy
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No problem. My approach in this book was to go for an emotional journey, with all the system, reincarnation coming later. At its heart, a story is about the evolution of a character...so I focused on that part, as its what I love reading. At ~70, the MC will retain his memories, and thats where the system and reincarnation plot points will come into play a lot more. I understand that you had to drop it, but if you have time later, do give it a try when there are more chapters yet! Thanks for reading!

RedGunner
RedGunnerLv3

Oh ok, then I will check it out

KillerHemboy:No problem. My approach in this book was to go for an emotional journey, with all the system, reincarnation coming later. At its heart, a story is about the evolution of a character...so I focused on that part, as its what I love reading. At ~70, the MC will retain his memories, and thats where the system and reincarnation plot points will come into play a lot more. I understand that you had to drop it, but if you have time later, do give it a try when there are more chapters yet! Thanks for reading!
mhafanboy25
mhafanboy25Lv3

I mean if that's true I might drop it but I have to read the first chapter to find out

Primordious_Law
Primordious_LawLv11

I suggest you to read the prequel dude you will get a better sense of the world and the stakes. I dont know why the author said that its not important to read the prequel but for me that's a big no no. It's like watching avengers endgame before watching any of the previous films. I hope you get my point.

RedGunner:Oh ok, then I will check it out
Primordious_Law
Primordious_LawLv11

You should read the prequel first honestly

mhafanboy25:I mean if that's true I might drop it but I have to read the first chapter to find out
chaoticdragneel
chaoticdragneelLv3

"All the deeds already performed by the MC will be brought up as legends which will be elaborated enough for anyone who is joining us at this juncture(the same applies to all other relevant information" so hes alone? what happened to his friends n family?

KillerHemboy:No problem. My approach in this book was to go for an emotional journey, with all the system, reincarnation coming later. At its heart, a story is about the evolution of a character...so I focused on that part, as its what I love reading. At ~70, the MC will retain his memories, and thats where the system and reincarnation plot points will come into play a lot more. I understand that you had to drop it, but if you have time later, do give it a try when there are more chapters yet! Thanks for reading!
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