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Tomoyuki
TomoyukiLv53yrTomoyuki

An awesome zombie story, Mark is an amazing, down to earth character, and I look forward to seeing him survive this apocalypse! As well as making his mark on the world!

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THE END OF LIFE

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Shaking_Sphere
Shaking_SphereLv13Shaking_Sphere

can't wait to see what mark he would make.

Jlairu
JlairuLv11Jlairu

Was that meant to be a pun? If it was nice try, still bad though.

Tomoyuki
TomoyukiLv5Tomoyuki

What pun?

Jlairu:Was that meant to be a pun? If it was nice try, still bad though.
Jlairu
JlairuLv11Jlairu

It was a question dude.. just say it wasnt a pun.

Tomoyuki:What pun?
Tomoyuki
TomoyukiLv5Tomoyuki

It was just a question, dude. Just tell me what you thought was supposed to be a pun.

Jlairu:It was a question dude.. just say it wasnt a pun.
Jlairu
JlairuLv11Jlairu

Oh thought you were just being a d*ck. Anyway the pun was his name being Mark and the ending leaving his mark on the world, get it? Idk it gave a chuckle at least.

Tomoyuki:It was just a question, dude. Just tell me what you thought was supposed to be a pun.
Jlairu
JlairuLv11Jlairu

Can't believe you seriously wrote it without knowing jeez, oh and I think I might've been the d*ck here, bad day don't blame me.

Tomoyuki:It was just a question, dude. Just tell me what you thought was supposed to be a pun.
Tomoyuki
TomoyukiLv5Tomoyuki

Oh, I didn't realize that. I typed it without realizing it. Whoops. Sometimes I just write stuff subconsciously without reading what I wrote.

Jlairu:Oh thought you were just being a d*ck. Anyway the pun was his name being Mark and the ending leaving his mark on the world, get it? Idk it gave a chuckle at least.
Tomoyuki
TomoyukiLv5Tomoyuki

Nah, that's fine. It happens.

Jlairu:Can't believe you seriously wrote it without knowing jeez, oh and I think I might've been the d*ck here, bad day don't blame me.
Firedragongod_1
Firedragongod_1Lv13Firedragongod_1

Yea the pun might work for a dad joke but in this case it just didnt cut it

Tomoyuki
TomoyukiLv5Tomoyuki

I wasn't even making any puns here...

Firedragongod_1:Yea the pun might work for a dad joke but in this case it just didnt cut it
CommanderBullshit
CommanderBullshitLv13CommanderBullshit

Ok buddy I believe you

Tomoyuki:I wasn't even making any puns here...