lol, I'll take your word for it. The grammar must've been so bad your's went down a notch just by reading. 🥲. Thanks for your sacrifice.

nothing wrong with the man wanting a finished piece, stop being rude.

😮‍💨 no dislike button.

pov changes are too frequent, it's annoying.

a bit irritated by this whole higher power irregular bs but....😮‍💨 we continue.

"My master killed them." 😮‍💨 You see now without PLOT that would arouse suspicion even more so. It's a weak wolf, he could have just said it was injured and you finished it off. There's no reason for some random person to care about a dead wolf. Instead what he did was give the man more questions, like why is the boy lying? There's fresh blood on the ground so unless he can teleport then what he said would be an obvious lie.

Anyways don't worry about the rating I'll probably delete this when I wake up. I recognize that such low ratings aren't good. Tried writing one of these myself but couldn't stick to it. keep up the good work. I'm going to sleep.

Not entirely relevant, but about 20% of your story. Since you couldn't give me a solid character and plot to get behind what's the point in reading further? Waste of time. Since you're the author I'll justify. Character is down to personal preference, but the story's development only leaves you thinking: so what, why?, who cares. Now as a reader if I'm left with any of those it's just a huge red flag.

That's nice, but you don't have to. It's just my opinion. I re-read it and it started making some sense. I think it's just one of those stories where you need to focus.

If you don't agree prove me wrong.

Seriously tired of this Loli. Someone needs to teach her some manners, or else my poor guy's gonna go insane. she's about six so that's 12 years until she gets common sense (since the seal should be lifted). 12 YEARS. Bruh.

Ah yes, these chapters are getting better.

Everything, it all feels like filler. This is pretty common, so I'm not especially bothered. But, if the story continues like this...

Such an overuse of brackets. A sentence is still meant to flow without reading the brackets. But here, if you don't read them you'll miss out on key info.

Unless the author went back and changed things, my point still stands. Anyone can come up with some reason to make nonsense relevant, but is it really important? No. Meh, why take a novel like this seriously? You probably already dropped this novel.

The comments to this post give pure joy 😊

*still haven't voiced my complaints about his cultivation*

The novel is slowly filler at the moment. I didn't talk about mana and realms in my review because I felt it was too long. So here: •He rejects going to the upper realm and acts like a house maid for those in the lower realm, in spite of the possibility of there being more mana and him being able to better exercise his powers. •He rejects going to the realms above despite his ultimate goal of being among the greats. You might think oh well he doesn't know enough yet. WRONG. He's read some books (or could have read countless given the time he's stayed there). So there is no excuse for him being a moron, needing to learn and be a disciple to weaklings of the lower realm. •If he was going to be a disciple why not try an upper realm sect. Two birds with one stone.

The story has a good premise, but bad development. It was fine for him to act like a moron for the first 50 chapters but from then on it just became irritating. So you're left with that recycled garbage story of an 'amazing' character that solves other peoples servants without return. Before you try to refute, accepting goods and demanding goods are two different things. A possible defence to the author is that this is all in an attempt to drag on the novel; since he introduced numerous realms that have yet to be discovered. Even still, since said chapters aren't out yet, and this is purely speculation, it's a so-so novel.

This is it for me. Can't say I didn't try.