Well this is a weird novel, not in a bad way really, I mean it starts, how do I say... not really interesting, is more like really cliché and probably you will feel discouraged for the way the author wrote about the wishes (well at least I was, and that doesn’t necessarily mean someone else will too) basically any of the wishes would make him completely broken with due time on a world in which he knows the future, but only on his first wish he got five different thing and that probably bothers you since well how can it be a single wish if I can wish for as many things as I want, in this regard I think the author could just sume it up as asking a geno art that grants him the ability to control de five elements, the other thing is that since there are so many wishes most people won’t be able to keep with them, I don’t even remember most of the Devil fruit powers already lol, more is not always better, but here I would say that the author actually does a good job in how the mc actually needs to train his powers and geno arts and that’s great, the second issue would be how easy he trust people for example Luo whatever and later on Yan Manlie, and while the first could be blamed on him actually being a small orphan the second doesn’t make sense, he could just tell her that it was something personal and be done with it and taking account what they know about him it would make sense for them to assume it was a geno art he was developing. So overall the novel has potential and the author is clearly improving, actually I would say that except for how he wrote the paragraph on the beginning the only other problem the novel has would be the mc no giving us the feeling of him being an actual person, his social interactions feel weird sometimes and some of the things he do doesn’t make sense and we aren’t really told what he is thinking while doing them, or why he doesn’t know certain things and like that, but it feels like the novel can develop a lot once the author gain more experience writing and that’s the idea, so keep up bro, it is actually entertaining and the idea is good even while it may be a little rough around the edges
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