Item: Super Gene Fan-Fiction
Rating: 1
Author: Ero_Usagi

Ero_UsagiLv54yr

2020-07-16 19:08

So... Let me get this straight... 4 chapters. 4 fucking chapters and i already want to kill the author. Let start with the very basic. Death background... Yada2 normal and honestly quite promising although there so many fucking stuff that unnecessary. Overall not bad Next is wish. 5 wish, not bad. Basically mathematics question 5 wish with at least 5 branch of question. The question is... Are you fucking retarded? How in the bloody hell people are allowed to get their wish like that? And for someone who his future we dont have any clue? Fucking stupid. Next is his childhood or whatever that **** he is. Fucking stupid, how in the bloody hell he is afraid of other childs. The next is how in the fucking hell that a 3 y o kid talking with ***** about 1 on 1 question? Next is writing style... Paragraph too thick need more spacing. Especially with the content it literally killing the mood to read it. Overall rating... 1/5 And if this review is gone. Meaning it is get deleted by the author... And if you do it... FUCK YOU. Before i end this, you can say that "the story will get better on later chapter" let me say this to you... "In this place. First impressions matter"

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