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2022-05-08 08:59

The plot is pretty good. but the relationships of characters in the story likes a spider web. Some characters told that they like/ love A, but they kissed and have intimate acts with B. It made me feel annoyed. Because of that, app to read half of the novel. I decided to dropped. If they were not ambiguous in the matter of romance. This could be novel is my favorite. I don not know why the angels and the demons in this novel can not see souls. it doesn't make sense.

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Miss_In_Kiss
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*after read half of the novel.

MysticAmy
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Hello! Thank you still for the review! You’re the only one who commented on this and it made me think that indeed, readers vary from one to another. ☺️ Still even though you decided to drop, thank you for giving my story a chance. May I ask what chapter you stopped? However it is like that in the beginning as there is needed drama to keep and spice things up for their relationship to happen and be more intense, the succeeding chapters of the book will make up for it as it was what most of my readers enjoyed and commented on in the other chapters! 💪 I hope you give the remaining chapters a try, but I won’t force you to as this is a decision every reader must have. 😁 Anyway, most authors will delete a review like this, but I’ll make it stay. 😊 It’s for my improvement after all and it’s for other readers to see as well. Thank you so much still for reading and for the review! 🥰

MysticAmy
MysticAmyAuthor

Oh plus the reason of them not seeing souls is for me to deviate from the stereotype of angels and demons automatically seeing them. If I do that, then the purpose of Devin being a Soul Eater would be irrelevant~ like why have a Soul Eater when others can see them and lead them or whatever? Something like that~

Miss_In_Kiss
Miss_In_KissLv4

i stopped at the chapter told about Shadow's past. .... so Arvid can not see Grey again? OMG it's so sad. i hoped she would be reincarnated.😭😭😭

MysticAmy
MysticAmyAuthor

*with Levin

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Shameless author review! 🤣 But I would like to leave a review myself as an author. 😊 I consider this novel my first novel that I wrote as an adult because the works that I have and translated here were my works when I was in high school, around 16-17 years old. 😅 Now that I wrote a new concept that I thought of as an *****, I am more proud of this work than the ones I previously worked on. 😁 For the writing quality, I am satisfied... but not quite, as I find myself lacking in using vocabulary words when I write. To be honest, I am kind of lazy looking for a deeper word to express a word which I would like to change, so sometimes I just leave it at that. 😅 As for the narration aspect, I still find difficulties writing in 3rd POV, but as I write, I will try my best to improve myself. ☺️ Update stability, I gave myself a 5 as I see no problem with it (because I am currently unemployed). 😂 Also, I publish one chapter a day and I have around 40+ chapters in my stockpile as I write 13 cha** a week so all is good! 😉 But I no longer do mass releases. Will do so if MGS finishes by January. 🤣 For story development, I am satisfied with my pacing for my work. Not too fast, not too slow. I do outlining to guide me as I write my story. 😊 As for character design, I did my best to think of them before I wrote the story and as I wrote the story. I even did personality tests for each character to guide me however, as I write, I still find a little difficulty in expressing some of them, though I am getting there as I take time to reread and edit before I publish them. 😄 Lastly, world background. To be honest, I am not quite sure if I did this well. 😅 If you noticed, I didn’t even name the city they are in. 🤪 Also, I did an effort as I searched about angels and demons so I could efficiently write about it in my story. Even though I encountered some difficulties, I try my best to tackle the problem by doing researches and by asking some opinions of other readers and fellow authors. 😁 Anyway, this is it for my shameless review! I hope whoever reads this gets the urge to leave a review. 🤣 Or if you passed by just to see the synopsis and some reviews, I hope you also give my story a chance. 🥰

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