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MysticAmy
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2020-10-01 12:24

Shameless author review! 🀣 But I would like to leave a review myself as an author. 😊 I consider this novel my first novel that I wrote as an adult because the works that I have and translated here were my works when I was in high school, around 16-17 years old. πŸ˜… Now that I wrote a new concept that I thought of as an *****, I am more proud of this work than the ones I previously worked on. 😁 For the writing quality, I am satisfied... but not quite, as I find myself lacking in using vocabulary words when I write. To be honest, I am kind of lazy looking for a deeper word to express a word which I would like to change, so sometimes I just leave it at that. πŸ˜… As for the narration aspect, I still find difficulties writing in 3rd POV, but as I write, I will try my best to improve myself. ☺️ Update stability, I gave myself a 5 as I see no problem with it (because I am currently unemployed). πŸ˜‚ Also, I publish one chapter a day and I have around 40+ chapters in my stockpile as I write 13 cha** a week so all is good! πŸ˜‰ But I no longer do mass releases. Will do so if MGS finishes by January. 🀣 For story development, I am satisfied with my pacing for my work. Not too fast, not too slow. I do outlining to guide me as I write my story. 😊 As for character design, I did my best to think of them before I wrote the story and as I wrote the story. I even did personality tests for each character to guide me however, as I write, I still find a little difficulty in expressing some of them, though I am getting there as I take time to reread and edit before I publish them. πŸ˜„ Lastly, world background. To be honest, I am not quite sure if I did this well. πŸ˜… If you noticed, I didn’t even name the city they are in. πŸ€ͺ Also, I did an effort as I searched about angels and demons so I could efficiently write about it in my story. Even though I encountered some difficulties, I try my best to tackle the problem by doing researches and by asking some opinions of other readers and fellow authors. 😁 Anyway, this is it for my shameless review! I hope whoever reads this gets the urge to leave a review. 🀣 Or if you passed by just to see the synopsis and some reviews, I hope you also give my story a chance. πŸ₯°

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MysticAmy
MysticAmyAuthor

Why is a-d-u-l-t censored? LMAO

BloodBurn
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Let me try.... *****

MysticAmy:Why is a-d-u-l-t censored? LMAO
BloodBurn
BloodBurnLv1

woah, it is actually got censored, what's wrong with that?

MysticAmy
MysticAmyAuthor

Ahahaha! I don’t know. 🀣

BloodBurn:woah, it is actually got censored, what's wrong with that?
BloodBurn
BloodBurnLv1

i dont know why, but i found this hilarious hahaha πŸ˜‚

MysticAmy:Ahahaha! I don’t know. 🀣
MysticAmy
MysticAmyAuthor

Same. haha!

BloodBurn:i dont know why, but i found this hilarious hahaha πŸ˜‚
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