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2020-07-07 17:15

Personally, this is the type of story I would add to my library and finish it in a week. I love the main protagonist she is very pure, innocent and a virgin lol. I love the flow and i am waiting for the future chapters. The author is one of the people that i support and love to death. Be sure to check out her other works and future novels to come. ANGEAL AND DEVIN FOR THE WIN. No expectations bebe just have fun in what you do and WE WILL BOTH WIN YES. BELIEVE!!! Your have the biggest potential bebe it has sky-rocketed overnight. Thats crazy. EVERYTHING IS A HOOK!!

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Waaaaah! Thank you so much, bibi! You are also doing well in your story! Keep up the good work~!

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Shameless author review! 🤣 But I would like to leave a review myself as an author. 😊 I consider this novel my first novel that I wrote as an adult because the works that I have and translated here were my works when I was in high school, around 16-17 years old. 😅 Now that I wrote a new concept that I thought of as an *****, I am more proud of this work than the ones I previously worked on. 😁 For the writing quality, I am satisfied... but not quite, as I find myself lacking in using vocabulary words when I write. To be honest, I am kind of lazy looking for a deeper word to express a word which I would like to change, so sometimes I just leave it at that. 😅 As for the narration aspect, I still find difficulties writing in 3rd POV, but as I write, I will try my best to improve myself. ☺️ Update stability, I gave myself a 5 as I see no problem with it (because I am currently unemployed). 😂 Also, I publish one chapter a day and I have around 40+ chapters in my stockpile as I write 13 cha** a week so all is good! 😉 But I no longer do mass releases. Will do so if MGS finishes by January. 🤣 For story development, I am satisfied with my pacing for my work. Not too fast, not too slow. I do outlining to guide me as I write my story. 😊 As for character design, I did my best to think of them before I wrote the story and as I wrote the story. I even did personality tests for each character to guide me however, as I write, I still find a little difficulty in expressing some of them, though I am getting there as I take time to reread and edit before I publish them. 😄 Lastly, world background. To be honest, I am not quite sure if I did this well. 😅 If you noticed, I didn’t even name the city they are in. 🤪 Also, I did an effort as I searched about angels and demons so I could efficiently write about it in my story. Even though I encountered some difficulties, I try my best to tackle the problem by doing researches and by asking some opinions of other readers and fellow authors. 😁 Anyway, this is it for my shameless review! I hope whoever reads this gets the urge to leave a review. 🤣 Or if you passed by just to see the synopsis and some reviews, I hope you also give my story a chance. 🥰

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