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MoeJam90
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2021-10-05 14:41

First off, I just have to apologize to the writer for withholding this review this long. I am truly in awe at how fleshed out her characters are. The way she wrote her characters truly amazed me. I loved how she wrote her female lead, Angeal! It must be quite a challenge to flesh out this character especially because of her inborn condition of being mute. The way she utilized the speaking device as means to communicate with the other characters was unique and challenging as well. Because of the robotic voice the machine gives off, it was difficult for her to have an emotional voice. By conveying both gestures and voice in the dialogue it makes it more realistic. I also like how the immortal characters see the mortality of man in a different light. They do not understand the concept of death but respect how it affects the mortals and how important it is for them to finish their goals before they died. I love to dig in deep with the story and see where this leads to, especially with male lead coming in to play.

The Soul Eater's Possession

MysticAmy
4.9
556 Chs

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MysticAmy
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OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW 🥺🥺🥺

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MysticAmy
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Shameless author review! 🤣 But I would like to leave a review myself as an author. 😊 I consider this novel my first novel that I wrote as an adult because the works that I have and translated here were my works when I was in high school, around 16-17 years old. 😅 Now that I wrote a new concept that I thought of as an *****, I am more proud of this work than the ones I previously worked on. 😁 For the writing quality, I am satisfied... but not quite, as I find myself lacking in using vocabulary words when I write. To be honest, I am kind of lazy looking for a deeper word to express a word which I would like to change, so sometimes I just leave it at that. 😅 As for the narration aspect, I still find difficulties writing in 3rd POV, but as I write, I will try my best to improve myself. ☺️ Update stability, I gave myself a 5 as I see no problem with it (because I am currently unemployed). 😂 Also, I publish one chapter a day and I have around 40+ chapters in my stockpile as I write 13 cha** a week so all is good! 😉 But I no longer do mass releases. Will do so if MGS finishes by January. 🤣 For story development, I am satisfied with my pacing for my work. Not too fast, not too slow. I do outlining to guide me as I write my story. 😊 As for character design, I did my best to think of them before I wrote the story and as I wrote the story. I even did personality tests for each character to guide me however, as I write, I still find a little difficulty in expressing some of them, though I am getting there as I take time to reread and edit before I publish them. 😄 Lastly, world background. To be honest, I am not quite sure if I did this well. 😅 If you noticed, I didn’t even name the city they are in. 🤪 Also, I did an effort as I searched about angels and demons so I could efficiently write about it in my story. Even though I encountered some difficulties, I try my best to tackle the problem by doing researches and by asking some opinions of other readers and fellow authors. 😁 Anyway, this is it for my shameless review! I hope whoever reads this gets the urge to leave a review. 🤣 Or if you passed by just to see the synopsis and some reviews, I hope you also give my story a chance. 🥰

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Khandie
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The Author of this books is a beautiful nice person that interacts with readers that makes it more special of a book, it's a awesome book alot of twist and turns keeping you watching for the next chapter wanting more😍🥰❤

4yr
Zeno98
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I started Reading this book some months ago and since the start the plot as caught my interest.😊😊🤩🤩 It might seems pretty mysterious at start but with every chapter the author will let you understand the real plot and will dissolve your dubts.😁😁👍👍 Let's talk a bit about the story~ -We have our main couple Angeal and Devin, that even with their strong connection and attraction, will be going to fight a really difficult enemy that will test how strong their Bond is.🥰🥰🥰 -There are other side couples with a lot of sweet moments(smut too👀👀) and a detailed explaination of who they are and their past.😉😉😉 -Last but not less important is the writing quality and the world background that it's something, on my opinion, only top writer can give!🥰🥰🥰 Our author is a really impressive writer with a lot of creativity and humor.😘😘😘 So, in the end, what i want to say it's give this book a chance you will not regret start reading this i can assure you that.😁😁😁 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘😘😘🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 YOU'RE DOING GREAT AMORE MIO~!

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SaBrInA
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This is honestly the best!!! It's so adorable and creative!! The characters have their own unique charisma and every chapter that I read, I am filler with different types of emotions (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤. I highly recommend this because it's just too adorable and cute for my heart!! (つ≧▽≦)つ

4yr
ales_san
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Hi author! A friend recommended this story.and I thanked her for that! It's my first time here in WebNovel and I searched you This story is great! Keep it up :)

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Sara_Wilcox
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I found this book during a reading event, and I Love it! The details of the world, characters, and subplots are amazingly written. The story is intricate but still easy to follow(which I love). I am super excited for my next iTunes card so I can keep reading! Highly Recommend!

4yr
OneWingedAngel
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This is a really nice story! From characters, setting, to plot... I like it! You have been writing fantasy stories for as long as I could remember, cousin! I've read The Arcane Book and Army of True Salvation... But this is a whole new level indeed! I can see this book's potential! It will leap in bounds! Good luck in the contest and I will always support you! Best story I read from you so far! Amazing as always!

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cking14
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I started Soul Eater 3-4 days ago and am loving it. I haven’t been able to stop reading it. I love the characters and their relationships. They are complicated, but wonderful. They show true caring and love amonst each other while facing their enemies. Mystic Amy does an amazing job telling their stories.

4yr
AmrutaSunil95
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Very excited for this book, as I get introduced to zombie word due to amy, now I m gonna also wanted to introduced to this new world, her books are way different and exciting, looking forward to reading more

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