Item: A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world
Rating: 1
Author: Idiosyncratic

IdiosyncraticLv153yr

2021-05-15 12:41

The grammar is bad, really bad, one of the worst ive seen on here. Not to mention theres no real flow to this “novel” and its all over the place.

A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

SagelyDaoist

3.5

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BrezerLv14

it's a good story idea and the cheat the mc has is cool but that's all I have. the mc is an idiot and acts like he is 10 he is supposed to be a super genius accepted to MIT at 15 but he is an idiot and has no maturity at all. the people around him coddle him and treat him like he is 10 also. I mean he totally fabricated base and a water/sewer system from nothing and then builds a vehicle from scratch and has killed people but they still talk to him like hes a toddler and he takes it. I really cant get into the aunt and the freak women because that whole thing is terrible.. the dialogue is terrible and needs and editor in the worst way. the best chapter of the story was the first one and then it went to crap.

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camy011Lv13

The grammar is really bad consisting almost entirely of run on sentences....................................................................

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BeerussLv14

i change my review once i read it. Good Day for fishing ain't it, Hyuu Haaa! Forth eorligasss, Ride for ruin!!! to the world ending..........

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Everything_ForeverLv14

The MC is an idiot,thought he would be smarter but apparently not. The grammar is pretty bad and it doesnt get any better with each chapter. I dont think this is a good story.

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HaremBeGoneLv5

Do me a favour please if you see this comment, Shoot me a reply if this novel ever gets an editor so I can actually attempt to read it thanks.

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DWArden45Lv5

Writing quality is alright but needs an editor to make scenes transition better. Most of the time you don't realize a time skip has happened or where everyone is. Story development is okay. Nothing to write home about but it's tiresome to keep seeing every man with powers turn into a *** maniac. Character design is utter shit. The mc is a child prodigy yet does the most reckless things despite having an army behind him. Dude has been in too many life threatening situations that are due to his utter recklessness/stupidity. Updating stability is ok. World background is good. All in all I would read this if a decent editor reigned in the bad and spaced out the story. As it is now, it is bad.

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Sage_HonosLv14

love the story! could use a bit of editing on the first few chapters but the rest is amazing! look forward to more. im a huge fan of magic technology combo stories! Especially since they are rather rare.

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N0B0DY3Lv5

Listen if you want your story to ebcome better you have to fix it yourself and read everyone’s comment. I might sugar coat this, but many people would not and have no reason to because you chose to put this novel up unless you figure out how it fails it will keep failing. just a comment hope you can understand

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ScionOfDegeneracyLv4

Author has no clue what actually represents as a peice of technology, lol. Just from the summary itself, I am already quite disappointed.

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Brian70707Lv15

Synopsis was excellent clearly explains enough to catch readers interest. Chapter 1 which I dropped at ruins entirety of it Sentence structure is almost non existent I find it hard to believe that their is a family like that, horrible siblings and parents sure but to not even notice son isn't living with them Is difficult to believe. Another thing difficult to believe is them being so oblivious that they don't notice mc success in things

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