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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv44yr
2020-06-28 22:41

C6 I dropped...this bk is great for people, they like it.. Reason I dropped, MC goes after the ICE chick, WHy I hate it? Author could;ve done some OC **** like her secretly helping MC, telling dad to not harm MC dad to much or just do something for him] BUT no, she just a useless ***** and MC accepts her after he beats her up...plus she gets ' interested ' MC after he beats her...yah, the usual slut from cultivation stories. Do understand that this is incredibly bias due me despising the ****ty chick and retarded MC that accepts a worthless chick easily...shallow lovers and relationships are something I despise

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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

It get's afterwards better, but i understand where you coming from.(was anoyed too.)

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

nah man, the way I see it, ***** had yrs to show her worth, OR author could;ve gone OC, but nah I hate her and MC too,,so yah

Kokushibou:It get's afterwards better, but i understand where you coming from.(was anoyed too.)
Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

I found the mc okay actually, maybe at the start not but later on he and she get's better in my opinion. Im not that big of a fan of oc, especially if it is a series which has basically no fanfics.(like this one)

amaturewriter:nah man, the way I see it, ***** had yrs to show her worth, OR author could;ve gone OC, but nah I hate her and MC too,,so yah
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

I like supportive chicks, not useless sluts,,dude, U like her, u do u, I hate her and stupid MC,,,,different opinions

Kokushibou:I found the mc okay actually, maybe at the start not but later on he and she get's better in my opinion. Im not that big of a fan of oc, especially if it is a series which has basically no fanfics.(like this one)
Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

It's fine, i don't think she is a slut. But if that's what you think, then that's okay i guess. At the start like i said, i was skeptical but later on there reliationship get's better.(this is the authors first ff (as far as i know) so i think he is doing pretty good, he only has one girl and author said if he does more only 1 or 2. The mc is no horny teenager is what im trying to say,(and he is not stupid, atleast not as 90% of the storys i read.) but the first arc was so-so but in my opinion it get's better.(you don't need to write something to this, if you want to read it read it if not then not. Atleast you review is not 1 star because of such a simple reason.

amaturewriter:I like supportive chicks, not useless sluts,,dude, U like her, u do u, I hate her and stupid MC,,,,different opinions
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

dude the romance is a pretty big thing in this bk cause of the families and plot, this chick is a thot, not slut....she shoudl've been OC, meaning not personality but helping MC in weakest moments, hell atleast not let dad get fked up or just secretly help him, but no,, she just a useless ****......the only reason the relationship ever mended was cause MC started rebuilding [like an idiot] and showed he was OP,,,,so yah,,,useless chick

Kokushibou:It's fine, i don't think she is a slut. But if that's what you think, then that's okay i guess. At the start like i said, i was skeptical but later on there reliationship get's better.(this is the authors first ff (as far as i know) so i think he is doing pretty good, he only has one girl and author said if he does more only 1 or 2. The mc is no horny teenager is what im trying to say,(and he is not stupid, atleast not as 90% of the storys i read.) but the first arc was so-so but in my opinion it get's better.(you don't need to write something to this, if you want to read it read it if not then not. Atleast you review is not 1 star because of such a simple reason.
Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

If she would helped him or his father she would have made everything worse for them, and the dad and mc would get punished but i get where you coming from (because i thought the same, but now idc anymore anyway.)

amaturewriter:dude the romance is a pretty big thing in this bk cause of the families and plot, this chick is a thot, not slut....she shoudl've been OC, meaning not personality but helping MC in weakest moments, hell atleast not let dad get fked up or just secretly help him, but no,, she just a useless ****......the only reason the relationship ever mended was cause MC started rebuilding [like an idiot] and showed he was OP,,,,so yah,,,useless chick
Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

She loved him, but when he is to weak or she not strong enough. Then obviosily they could not be together, and if the mc shows how talented/strong he is, then they obviosily say not much about there reliationship.

amaturewriter:dude the romance is a pretty big thing in this bk cause of the families and plot, this chick is a thot, not slut....she shoudl've been OC, meaning not personality but helping MC in weakest moments, hell atleast not let dad get fked up or just secretly help him, but no,, she just a useless ****......the only reason the relationship ever mended was cause MC started rebuilding [like an idiot] and showed he was OP,,,,so yah,,,useless chick
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

she couldve asked dad not to harm MC dad, she could've secretly helped him...dude she wasnt some weak ***** aight, in bks its shown many times how she was a princess with power/influence, she wasnt a puppet...[why do u think I am calling her aa shallow slut, if she was weak, i'd be fine, she wasnt...rread the light novels or manga]

Kokushibou:She loved him, but when he is to weak or she not strong enough. Then obviosily they could not be together, and if the mc shows how talented/strong he is, then they obviosily say not much about there reliationship.
Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

Okay okay chill my dude, i did not read tve novel only manga (but this is a long time ago) so chill. I don't like it to, but i can live with it.(or more like i can read it without problem and enjoy it.)

amaturewriter:she couldve asked dad not to harm MC dad, she could've secretly helped him...dude she wasnt some weak ***** aight, in bks its shown many times how she was a princess with power/influence, she wasnt a puppet...[why do u think I am calling her aa shallow slut, if she was weak, i'd be fine, she wasnt...rread the light novels or manga]
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

*sigh*....just go eat ass

Kokushibou:Okay okay chill my dude, i did not read tve novel only manga (but this is a long time ago) so chill. I don't like it to, but i can live with it.(or more like i can read it without problem and enjoy it.)
Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

Hahaha

amaturewriter:*sigh*....just go eat ass
Jack_Levis
Jack_LevisLv1

Really, goes for the Ice Chick? I am just on the Ch that he pretty much tells her off in that forest. Hoping for the Teacher NGL.

dylan_pyle
dylan_pyleLv14

It's a shame that many web novels and fanfics are filled with predictable plotlines like romance, harem, friendship, and revenge. It's rare to find a story where the main character is truly selfish.I was looking for fanfic for a versatile mage where the MC does not save people, has no romance, no harem, no connections he just wants to learn, experiment, evolve, cultivate and scheme. neutral evil

Dex_2000
Dex_2000Lv4

That was the most respectful interaction I saw on this platform 😁.

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