Dex_2000

Man, your work is great, but please make some space between the dialogs and general pov. Other than that everything is good

God damn, can we like find the devil fruit but Arashi doesn't eat it? He is immortal for god's sake. Feed it to someone from his crew, i dunno

God damn, I love this work) Thx a lot)

hahahah, nice one

Can someone recommend me novel or fanfic please? it's so damn hard to find anything worth reading. Except this novel, it's great

why wizards don't use rings?

Dunno, read up to 18 chp(all at the moment of this review). Translation is good, if there were any grammar mistakes than i didn't noticed. Give this work a read. I don't know what else to say... bruh...