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AriosAeonVonBelser
AriosAeonVonBelserLv44yr
2020-06-29 13:15

Although I like the story I don't like the MC. He is too arrogant, can author please thone down his attitude, because he is becoming annoying. Like when he is running using wind element and knock into a girl, instead of apologizing he mock her instead. It's good too have pride in your abilities, but putting others below you, it's just too much. Make him at least a good person, and not like the typical cultivation novel young master. Where you just mock him he kill you, like in the summons dimension where layda kill another summoner when he mock her master, he can atleast order layda to just break his leg or arms or break his balls, but you kill him immediately. Although the story is good I just don't like the MC attitude, so thats all๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

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Well power corrupts the best of people and that's what we see in real life politicians now imagine having superpowers and your strong enough to do anything The mc arrogance is just some light hearted banter at this point i don't see him going around to slaughter or rape people then its all good

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