Review Detail of TaintedMetal in An Unfortunate Nobody's (Forced) Adventure

The plot takes its time to develop as the chapters go on, each with its own scenes and they are accompanied with a large amount of well placed references towards anime, manga and other cultural media references. Said references are of course entertaining. The story does live up to its expectation of chaotic, seeing how there are many things going on. My only criticism is that some of the sentences have too much "sound effects." Words like "BOOM" seem more like something that would appear in an audio version compared to the written book. But overall, great work.