Don’t criticise fanfics that doesn’t suit you. It’s just a waste of time.
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Well, it has to do with his Semblance that effected him...
No, that was Last Jedi.
After all, it wouldn't be interesting if he became a baby-snatching, brainwashing, sociapath serving "the Light", instead of lightning-throwing, planet-killing, badass Dark Lord of the Sith. But he ain't Revan, I can tell you that. Man's too badass to die.
Please comment your thoughts of this chapter. I would like to hear your opinions.
No, it's dead I'm afraid. Life happened. I wasn't eager to continue this story because I felt disappointed from it. Though, I'm working on a new different fanfic, its called RWBY: Jedi of Skywalker if you want to check it out.
Enemy Ninja POV: Yo why is there a blond kid wearing bright orange jumpsuit in the middle of the night-
She's not in Hell, she's saying that this world feels like Hell
E. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Yeah, sure. Why not.
Well, Mark couldn't kill him. Who's to say Yang would?
Fook. I didn't know.
Hmm. I guess you're right about that. But what improvement does it make your 'ranting' benefit this story? Do you want this to change? Or are you just saying my story sucks? If so, don't even say it again please.