What ruins this story completely is the split personality and the split magic core. It was fine up to that point, however, I despise stories like this. I thought that they would merge straight away and make the soul strength double or something. But now we have an extra constantly talking in his head... The split-core makes no sense either. I get if it halved his magic but you split it light and dark. Magic is magic... there is no light and dark side this isn't fcking StarWars xD Spells can have an element but magic is magic...
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