So I was pretty excited going into this. I just recently finished playing the 3 recent tomb raider games back to back so the timing was perfect. However, my excitement was quickly shot down and curb stomped into the ground. Made some lame wishes but that's whatever, didn't care much. I was just too excited to get into the story. I even ignored the subpar English. You made it clear early on that this would not be exclusively Tomb Raider, and would also be including some other series like Uncharted and Indiana Jones. This is fine because all these series' are similar in the fashion that they are mostly grounded in reality with some supernatural sprinkled on top. I'm completely fine with making this a crossover, I thought it was a nice twist. What I am NOT okay with though is when you started adding a bunch of other weird shıt and even started adding some goddamn anime characters... Like, really bruh? You said in the description that you read too many anime fanfics, which is why you decided to write a Tomb Raider fanfic. So, why would you do this? Sigh.. The story hasn't even gotten to the Tomb Raider part yet, but I no longer even care about that. After all the plots and elements introduced the Tomb Raider storyline now feels meaningless. The icing on the cake for my disapointment is added when you decided to incorporate a system. Unnecessary and unwanted. As if his 'powers' weren't lame enough already. The cherry on top is when his girlfriend dies and is reborn as his daughter. That shıt is just weird. I don't know if I'll continue this or not. Can't really find the motivation to do so. Maybe if it starts getting better, idk.
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LIKEHis girlfriend died but MC used this thingy to bring her back to life but she was brought back as a child.
Uncle_Sheogorath:Girlfriend reborn as his daughter!? Lol, wtf is that?
Wow.... prob won't carry on then. Does he even get his arm back? I found the whole thing completely forced and illogical. I mean I understood the eye considering the situation, so I wasn't much bothered by it. I mean he could use it for archaeology stuff he doesn't know. What annoyed me was how he was meant to be this perfect human with massive upgrades. He walks down the corridor and gets injured by a random zombie..... like wtf what happened to his enhanced body? Then the way he lost his arm... I'm speechless. It has so much bs it's not even funny. I guess it was later on used as a tool to make him retire but then again this makes no sense. It's like the author is turning the mc into a cyborg... Ngl as well but this whole thing is confusing to me. I came to read about Tomb raiders and suddenly there are all these op af people who can destroy everything, gods etc I mean how tf does Lara do anything? I thought she was just a human with strong combat and intelligence.....