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Toji Fushiguro jujutsu kaisen arsenal would be very useful.
I'm glad this isn't the main plot because I found it quite boring, I can't find anything interesting in this script
8 wishes, now I know why this fic fell apart.
This fic has potential, currently it looks like a script for a story. It lacks depth, the characters look like robots, they don't show emotion and the interactions are very forced. I don't know about other readers but I can't get attached to it, I think in 3 to 6 days I'll already forget about this fic and that's not good
I understood this part, it weakens in this period between night and day. I didn't really understand why after he launched that powerful attack he was completely powerless And that doesn't make much sense because the world can't act directly against the MC, just suppress some of his power, but that still doesn't explain why he's so weak.And as an "ultimate life form" he shouldn't be so dependent on mana, MC had the advantage and he didn't need to win the battle just survive for 10 minutes.
I realized that this story has inspiration in Fourth Prince's Debauchery, And I found that strange because if he's an immortal he should already be used to killing thousands of people and destroying entire worlds so he's sad for the bear cub, it didn't make much sense for me.
Introduce more about this other reincarnated person, does he have powers? And most importantly, is the MC a Simp from the Stark family?
Apart from magic skills, the rest of the powers were a bit out of place, all these powers can be replicated with magic and I can't see a lot of development potential for these powers. I think that if the MC chose a power based on learning talent in the style of that Chinese fanfic "Comprehension Heaven" it would be much more useful and would have great potential for development.
Why choose someone from another world?, I know this is a method for the story to happen, but it's so strange