Item: Doomsday：I Have A System
Rating: 2.8
Author: FALLOUTWander

FALLOUTWanderLv134yr

2020-07-27 21:27

It seems like a good story but has serious bad spelling and alot of direct translate that means litterly nothing in English as the idioms don't match forcing you to puzzle the crude translation out. Honestly 'pig hand' is among several indirect things they mention that make no sense in English till you puzzle it out it's something like perverted hand. As well spelling has some error in the 21 pages I read so far... Grape was the last miss spelling I caught. So while Interesting enough story with a not stupid Mc, it's not really enjoyable given the amount of puzzling needed to do.. definitely not something fit for leisurely reading as it currently is.

Doomsday：I Have A System

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