Item: Doomsday：I Have A System
Rating: 1
Author: DentatolucioXIV

DentatolucioXIVLv44yr

2020-07-16 05:38

The grammar is horrible, I dont understand anything I feel like losing brain cells ugh, and it is shameless to put something of this quality with locked chapters

Doomsday：I Have A System

URU

2.0

113 Chs

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RiassubaLv15

This is so bad when it comes to the english and the grammar. Its unreadable. Writer either needs a better translater or a better editer. I had such a hard time understanding anything in the first chapter.

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i am pretty sure this is a good book ....from the 1 percent i could understand ..and the other 99 percent that left me with a headache i am waiting until this gets an editor

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SaberswordguyLv13

The story is interesting but geez the grammer is horrendously bad I have to keep putting together words so that I can understand the sentences I'm usually not the type to ***** about grammar but this cuts the cake

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magapiLv5

A premium novel with this quality of grammar??......mehhhhh😕😕😕😕😕... Ur joking right??

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Good story, but a horrible machine translate... pleas give this story a real translater, and reedit (and translate) the chapters............

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