Item: Doomsday：I Have A System
Rating: 3.6
Author: Vaibhav_Vinu

Vaibhav_VinuLv34yr

2020-07-19 14:17

i am pretty sure this is a good book ....from the 1 percent i could understand ..and the other 99 percent that left me with a headache i am waiting until this gets an editor

Doomsday：I Have A System

URU

2.0

113 Chs

Liked by 16 people

Replies3

LovesSystemNovelsLv12

No kidding glad im not the only one i mean this would be great if the author got some actual english lessons i mean make it where we belike he gave that guy hid knife yet im pretty sure he still has it and the computer thing that he put in his backpack im still wondering if it's in there and if it is u wonder why u have no space in it

4yr

LovesSystemNovelsLv12

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BeluganLv15

Yea. The grammar is terrible. That's why I stopped reading this

4yr

Other Reviews

RiassubaLv15

This is so bad when it comes to the english and the grammar. Its unreadable. Writer either needs a better translater or a better editer. I had such a hard time understanding anything in the first chapter.

4yr

SaberswordguyLv13

The story is interesting but geez the grammer is horrendously bad I have to keep putting together words so that I can understand the sentences I'm usually not the type to ***** about grammar but this cuts the cake

4yr

magapiLv5

A premium novel with this quality of grammar??......mehhhhh😕😕😕😕😕... Ur joking right??

4yr

DentatolucioXIVLv4

The grammar is horrible, I dont understand anything I feel like losing brain cells ugh, and it is shameless to put something of this quality with locked chapters

4yr

RaukoLv14

Good story, but a horrible machine translate... pleas give this story a real translater, and reedit (and translate) the chapters............

4yr

Kenlinvert1Lv1

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Daoist814941Lv11

Reveal spoiler

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SahsLv5

oh my God, what a garbage fire, I thought I found a good story, but the grammar, the sentencing, the word translation, are horrendous. it is simply unreadable.

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