Item: Reincarnated: The legendary moon sword
Rating: 3.8
Author: sagorika_adhikari

sagorika_adhikariLv54yr

2020-10-26 18:52

The story is narrated by a legendary sword. This one point in itself steals the show, The sci-fi vibe is very optimum. the style of narration is cool and the plotline is great, Still, it could be more polished, for a project beginning, it's a good start.

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Diamond_AirAuthor

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