Item: Reincarnated: The legendary moon sword
Rating: 4.2
Author: Hesreth

HesrethLv104yr

2020-11-02 12:35

Really love the concept! An ancient magic sword finding itself in an 80's style sci-fi world? That is just cool! Unfortunately, your writing doesn't do the story justice yet. The pacing is a bit off, with grammatical errors, run-on sentences and an overuse of ellipses (...). The characters are fun and you've defined their personalities rather well, so that's going for you. I look forward to seeing how you improve. Keep it up!

Reincarnated: The legendary moon sword

Diamond_Air

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Diamond_AirAuthor

Thanks a lot! I'll work on it!!

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