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R_F_T_SLv34yr
2020-12-17 23:28

I must applaud the author for such a refreshing novel. this is a nice piece and I can see it going really far. I've read only 5 chapters thus far but it still is quite amazing how I'm drawn into the world with ease. looking forward to more exciting chapters as I read on a few grammatical errors to take care of and that's the only problem i have with the work. nice one author 😊

Reincarnated: The legendary moon sword

Diamond_Air
4.8
92 Chs

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Diamond_Air
Diamond_AirAuthor

Thanksss, I'll find time to correct those errors 😅

4yr
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R_F_T_S
R_F_T_SLv3

Alright 😌

Diamond_Air:Thanksss, I'll find time to correct those errors 😅
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Hesreth
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Really love the concept! An ancient magic sword finding itself in an 80's style sci-fi world? That is just cool! Unfortunately, your writing doesn't do the story justice yet. The pacing is a bit off, with grammatical errors, run-on sentences and an overuse of ellipses (...). The characters are fun and you've defined their personalities rather well, so that's going for you. I look forward to seeing how you improve. Keep it up!

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kuhaku_sora
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In all honesty, I really like the start up of your work. The moment that the mistress died in the first part was exquisitely well-done! No words can truly describe how happy I am reading such a wonderful chapter/story. It's even better than "I was reincarnated as a sword", for me HAHAHA The only things that I can advise are you need to edit the commas and periods in sentences. There are a few of them out there, so be sure to keep an eye out of them. Another thing worth mentioning is...nah, actually, the story is good. I like it. I like it alot. Keep up the good work, mate!

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Moongirl_Mich
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This was excellent every details are written in the story and it was interesting to read you all will enjoy this story. Author you should keep it up!!!

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Reveal spoiler

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shaeshang
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I'm very satisfied with the overall story. The pair is chaotic and the interaction is good. Applaud. I really love every bit of it. it's nice and simple. Easy to read. Keep it up, author-nim. 😊👏🏼

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YaraMinami
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oThis took my imagination to the next level. I can imagine every description written in my head. Looking forward to how you will end this story!😍

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amber0613
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Wow! Sci-Fi! I loved science, but here is wondrous! But I'm into mystery and horror, this story can give someone interest your taste. It was like an Action Movies, great wars are difficult to write most in the battles. But hey, who knows that you can write the most detailed battle ever? This is a great story author! Keep up the good work! :)

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neonlover_1
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A unique and nice novel, the grammar is good, couldn't find any mistakes. The story is developing in a satisfactory phase, which is not too slow or not too fast, keeping readers like me engaged. The sci-fi plot is amazing, I liked the mc, and the other side characters introduced till now. I will be rooting for the novel!

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