Review Detail of Gaureeey in The Criminals

HI LOVELY AUTHORRR! Firstly, I can't help but mention it's easier on the readers eyes if the paragraphs are smaller. Secondly, the different dialects of the characters have been maintained wonderfully oof! Lasty, it was never a cup of my tea, (this genre) however i find myself intrigued to stay on track with this amazingly scripted piece. The time i have in my hands doesnt do justice as i reallly wanna read more hehe. WELL DONE