webnovel
Esiyx
EsiyxLv44yr
2020-07-07 12:56

First of all I think that the writing quality is very good, when I read the book I don’t have any trouble understanding what the author is trying to write and the grammar is good. I’m taking one star away for stability of updates because author doesn’t post much, but when they do it’s always good so not much of a problem. Otherwise, everything is pretty good! Characters, world, and story are all well written. I would prefer if the story was slightly slower, because I just like reading those books, but the pace is already very good. Overall a good book and would recommend reading Ps sorry for the long review, just kinda thought this would help maybe brighten authors day a bit, bc as another author I know the feeling of lack of motivation.

Vyr's journey through the multiverse

AlucardVonHellsing
4.5
54 Chs

Liked by 9 people

LIKE
Replies2
Tirell_Agarson
Tirell_AgarsonLv4

cool

4yr
Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv11

I was going to review this myself but as stated by Esiyx I completely agree with every point mentioned. It's truly a great read which only lacks in it's release frequency imho.

4yr
2
Other Reviews
Randomname69
Randomname69Lv3

Reveal spoiler

4yr

Shira_ori
Shira_oriLv15

I love it cant wait to continue reading i only just got to the second world and already love it and need more. The writing quality is really good as well as the story cant stop reading.

4yr
Fallensnug
FallensnugLv12

Reveal spoiler

3yr
UsedCreation
UsedCreationLv14

Its good, i love it, give me more Thats it and thank you

4yr
Sorria
SorriaLv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Arious3721
Arious3721Lv10

if it would be updated more often with new chapters coming out then it would have a much higher score in my opinion

1yr
soul445
soul445Lv14

now that RWBY volume 9 is out are you going to resume the book or are you still going to continue to hiatus because I really like this book I think it's 👍 and the best part about it is that it's a Yuri RWBY which is very rare and some of the books that make them end up just flopping at the middle of it but hey man if you need to take your time do what you got to do man we'll still be here rooting for you do you best of my life be good with you

2yr
II_Dandy_II
II_Dandy_IILv1

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
Immadropitall
ImmadropitallLv2

Great Novel the only problem was in the early chaps were they don't even bother to ask about her strange eyes. Although some of them noticed but I have a case of strange OCD wherein I love details of the Main Characters so maybe its just me. So any reader who gets mad at me for this go **** yourself this is my opinion. Great Novel Author-san please continue more.

3yr
Related Stories

Genshin Impact : Sorry can't be there till the end

Original work: https://www.ciweimao.com/book/100348111 Discord server: https://discord.gg/pWRPkevZvq ------ Dec 13, 2024: Got permission from the original author. ------ Five hundred years ago. Raiden Ei looked down at the young man in the courtyard and said indifferently: "Heh, a mortal... To 'eternity', it's just a fleeting life... Well, well, I'll keep you company for a while." Five hundred years later. On the sickbed. "Waaah, you bastard, hang in there! Don't die!!" - The small tree planted for many years, watered day and night, never to see it flourish, Dying the night before the loved one returns from studies, A person and a god, both full of hope yet growing apart, unable to wait for the day she emerges from the Pure Land and opens her heart. Feeding fried tofu for many years, the little fox grows into a big fox, while I slowly age, no longer able to hold kitchen utensils. Sacred cherry blossoms, waka poems, plum wine and snacks, sardines and salt, the shrine covered in fallen red petals, summer promises, I can't keep our date again. Osmanthus wine tastes the same as I remember... In the end, it's not like the youth's journey. Human life has its limits. "Companionship is the most enduring confession—but I'm sorry, as a mortal, I can't always say: 'I love you'."​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

Crepveant · Video Games
4.8
96 Chs

Honkai Impact: Become Their Hero

Unexpectedly crossed over into the world of Honkai Impact 3rd, Elias is determined to save everyone from tragedy. The Final Lesson will never come. Every member of Flame-Chasers will survive. Humanity will trample Honkai beneath their feet. This imperfect world will be reshaped into the one he desires. However... Kiana: "With Elias around, it's like having the strength of ten thousand people!" Bronya: "We're going to the beach today with Bronya and Seele, Elias—Papa!" Raiden Mei: "I was here first! I'm Elias's first girlfriend!" Elysia: "I end with me and begin with you. Mei may be the first, but Miss Pink Elf is Elias’s ultimate destination!" Elias: "...Honestly, compared to surviving this battlefield of love, overcoming the final end seems much easier."

Dao_Of_Heaven · Video Games
4.9
72 Chs

Genshin Impact: I, Heavenly Principle, Will Make Teyvat Supreme

Good news: I have transmigrated to Teyvat and become the Heavenly Principle. Bad news: The world of Teyvat doesn’t have much time left. Good news: I have a system that allows me to devour two-dimensional worlds. Noah looked at the countless familiar worlds, tears of sorrow streaming down his face, and announced on the spot: “I will not only be the Heavenly Principle of Teyvat but also the Heavenly Principle of countless worlds.” “So, my rules are the laws.” From then on, one Heavenly Principle and a group of fierce Gods embraced trembling worlds one after another. After devouring the world of Demon Slayer, Teyvat’s lifespan increased by 5,000 years. After devouring the world of Akame ga Kill!, Teyvat’s barriers were strengthened by 100 times. After devouring the world of Inuyasha, Teyvat forms the cycle of reincarnation. …

Dao_Of_Heaven · Video Games
4.9
150 Chs

Tycoon of Video Games

A soul from Earth found himself transmigrated into a person from a parallel world, a world that lacked video games and an established gaming industry. Follow the journey as this individual rises to become the video game tycoon of this unique world. [Please note that any similarities between the names of characters or places in this story and those in the real world are purely coincidental. I do not claim ownership of any products or properties mentioned in this novel. This work is entirely fictional.] (Cover photo is not mine. Ctto to the original owner.) This novel draws inspiration from 'Tokyo Video Game Tycoon,' although there may have been some similarities at the beginning, the plot will take its own distinct path as it unfolds. On average, each chapter spans approximately 1,000 words or so. For those interested, you can find 10-15 chapters in advance on my Patreon page at patreon.com/NewComer714.

NewComer714 · Video Games
4.3
501 Chs

Genshin Impact: My villain system is a little different.

When I crossed into the world of Teyvat, I received both good and bad news. The good? I was blessed with a system. The bad? It was supposedly a "villain's system." "Bearer, what is your greatest desire?" the system asked. "Well... survival would be nice. Oh, and maybe collecting a harem?" "Granted! But first, you must fulfill one condition." "Which is...?" "During daylight hours, you must help elderly ladies cross the street and perform good deeds..." "Or perhaps assist Keqing with her construction work, or aid Ningguang in finding mora-producing floating crystals..." "And naturally, by night, you shall become a hero of darkness, upholding justice—" "Wait, when am I supposed to sleep?" "At your age, how can you even think about sleeping?" Puzzled, I asked one final question: "Aren't you supposed to be a VILLAIN system? Helping me become evil? Shouldn't villains be causing chaos and mayhem?" "Indeed! But consider this – I believe the Abyss Order and Fatui are actually the good guys. Besides, helping elderly ladies cross streets? You're actually preventing them from getting exercise and maintaining their health. Isn't that wonderfully villainous?" I couldn't help but applaud the system's twisted logic. And thus began the tale of a most unconventional villain in Teyvat.

rivyura · Video Games
4.7
210 Chs
Login