Review Detail of Hikik0m0ri in Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]
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I can say right away that if you are an experienced reader and have read quite a few novels and fan fiction then you will not really like this story. 1. The protagonist doesn’t have any peculiarities in himself, he doesn’t want a battle, he doesn’t think rationally, and has a hero’s syndrome, as soon as he finds out that the monsters want to attack the nearest village, he rushed to save them without caring about his life Putting the well-being of outsiders above his own, in general, the standard protagonist with the syndrome of the hero, he immediately wanted to shelter the first oncoming village in his personal world (one of his desires) without even knowing any of the inhabitants of this village. 2. One of his desires was a system, the implementation of which could be better, he also wished that he could share his system with anyone he wants, which puts the originality of our protagonist even lower. 3. As always, when choosing the personality of the system (a very cliche), he repeated the mistake of many authors and chose a soft and gentle character instead of, for example, a coudere or yandere, and given that he created her body and she will appear in this story and most likely in his harem she will be quite boring. 4. His strength is also developing quite strange, he spent 6 years training in a special chamber and almost did not become stronger, but for completing a cooking assignment he receives a ton of experience and Enkid, one gets the feeling that the author does not want to make OP the main character in the beginning of the story, but wants to give him a bunch of great powers and artifacts. In general, this story is not bad, but for people like me who do not like the main character in the form of a hero who wants to save strangers, risking his life (not even for the sake of girls), this story does not fit, plus it is clear that the author does not have much writing experience stories but he in my view is slowly developing. P.S. As I always like to say, I do not want to offend the work or the author with my comment, I just decided to express my opinion.
Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]
Mikejd
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I one of those who dislike when mc share his power and cheats with everyone including strangers I can even tolerate the english and hero syndrome if that doesn't get to worse but I have a heavy dislike for thing like power sharing of its not with his love interest and family whom he trust (Probably I am selfish but that how I am) Thanks for the review
Remember always that sharing your power is the same as sharing your wife with others . Also thanks for your review as i absolutely hate any works that's share the power of mc with others. I don't really get it why the author wants their mc to share his power with other . For me it's kinda disgusting . For example your personal phone or pc will you share it with others or your bank account . Sharing power for me is even worse than it . If you r calling me selfish for it then you are probably a hypocrite or a saint who can give his wife to others by helping them satisfy their lust, for helping other you will give all of your fortune to others by becoming poor yourself or giving your own to heart to others for saving a stranger . P.S so if you r not a hypocrite then you r a saint who I respect with all my heart cause when I am feeling lust full you will give me your wife or daughters to extinguished my fire . So tell me If i am not respectful to you then who can i even respect . Well i am just angry at people who think they are full of kindness and selfless in reality is a bunch of hypocrites . They just do good things to raise their fame . Remember in this world the only one who will give you things without seeking benefits is your parents ( sigh even in their pure love is selfish reason like wanting a child so they can have their bloodline left in this world after they die , wanting their their child grow up becoming someone great so they can show off to others , also the most reason is its their child their flesh and blood so they love their child unconditionally so If you aren't their child will they give you that much love that's a question worthy to think about ....) But still only their love is the most pure and unconditional in this world . Even the children love for their parents don't come close to parents love for there children . Shi*t why I am writing all this bs and nonsense well meh since I have written them already I don't want to delete it . And I will make you guys suffer by making you read this bs. Kukukuku 😈
Weirdo:I had truly tried... I tried to read it and give it the benefit of "Everything would be okay in next chapter"... And yeah.. This is honestly a bad fanfic and it's not the "English is not my first language" type of problem...
If you read until chapter 22,you would know how much of the suffering I have... I truly believe that it would get better... But sigh...
Shadewind:Lol even your dao of 'everything will be okay in next chapter' can't withstand this fic.
What happened ....? I have no energy to read this fic which shares mc's power . It's plague for me . So i am curious what happened that make you suffer this much
Weirdo:If you read until chapter 22,you would know how much of the suffering I have... I truly believe that it would get better... But sigh...
Shadewind:What happened ....? I have no energy to read this fic which shares mc's power . It's plague for me . So i am curious what happened that make you suffer this much
Mikejd:Well i didn't got offended from the previous review and thx for the critics
Weirdo:If you read until chapter 22,you would know how much of the suffering I have... I truly believe that it would get better... But sigh...
Shadewind:Lol even your dao of 'everything will be okay in next chapter' can't withstand this fic.
Weirdo:If you read until chapter 22,you would know how much of the suffering I have... I truly believe that it would get better... But sigh...
Weirdo:If you read until chapter 22,you would know how much of the suffering I have... I truly believe that it would get better... But sigh...
I don't understand what you're saying and cnat copy it because I use phone.. So I'm going to guess that you should be asking about my gender right? I'm a guy.
Shinmatsu:Seu dao de "tudo ficará bem no próximo capítulo" deve ter subido de nível pra caramba agora